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PostPosted: 2009-01-10 11:21:35    Post subject: 七律-回望2008(修改稿) Reply with quote

前二年都有诗回望过,今年也不好例外,草上一首望斧正:

七律-回望2008

风雪兼程渡岁关, 人生栈道越艰难。
商场碌碌谋柴米, 客户频频减货单。
股债金融颓势猛, 楼房价格跌声寒。
庭前见惯花开落, 世道折腾迎鹤还。

碌,跌,折―入声
折腾-时髦用语, Laughing Laughing

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七律-回 望

商海浮沉又一年, 风狂浪骤过深渊。
久无雅兴敲新句, 暂有残诗和众贤。
对镜频频凝鬓色, 驱车疾疾越山川。
为谋生计添烦苦, 回首瞻前更失眠。
和:去声
一,疾,失:入声
2006/12
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七律-回望 2007

人生回望又匆匆,岁晚沉思寥寂中。
所幸同俦微异己,尚存片瓦对寒风。
故人渺渺烟云散,大雪茫茫塔影空。
浪迹天涯停泊处,歌吟动地啸苍穹。
寂,迹,泊-入声
2007 12 31
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PostPosted: 2009-01-10 18:38:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

年年有望年年望,一叶知秋总适时.

祝秋叶牛年诗坛商场双丰收!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-11 05:01:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

年年回望年年望,希望牛年牛起来,抱条金牛回家转!!! Laughing Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-01-11 08:24:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

庭前见惯花开落, 世道折腾牛角还。

Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-01-12 13:45:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
年年有望年年望,一叶知秋总适时.

祝秋叶牛年诗坛商场双丰收!


谢谢黄老师祝愿,也祝您新的一年万事如意!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-12 13:46:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

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年年回望年年望,希望牛年牛起来,抱条金牛回家转!!! Laughing Laughing Laughing


庆宏兄,同感,同贺。'thanks'
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PostPosted: 2009-01-12 13:49:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

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庭前见惯花开落, 世道折腾牛角还。

Very Happy Very Happy


'money''money''money'
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PostPosted: 2009-01-12 14:30:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
庭前见惯花开落, 世道折腾牛角还。

Very Happy Very Happy


'money''money''money'


秋香MM, 你的眼睛好吓人哇,,,,,, Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-01-12 17:16:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

祝贺秋兄商场诗坛双丰收

千山皑皑银龙锁
万水滔滔碧波催
弹指四十秋叶落
一朝抱得金牛回
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PostPosted: 2009-01-13 05:53:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
七律-回 望

商海浮沉又一年, 风狂浪骤过深渊。
久无雅兴敲新句, 暂有残诗和众贤。
对镜频频凝鬓色, 驱车疾疾越山川。
为谋生计添烦苦, 回首瞻前更失眠。
和:去声
一,疾,失:入声
2006/12



七律 步韵奉和

回眸壬戌太平年,似有乾龙潜入渊。
斟酒杯中饮君子,品茶壶里沏贞贤。
不甘默默游西野,却合悠悠涉大川。
最是揪心烦恼事,天伦美梦伴无眠。


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PostPosted: 2009-01-14 05:38:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
七律-回望 2007

人生回望又匆匆,岁晚沉思寥寂中。
所幸同俦微异己,尚存片瓦对寒风。
故人渺渺烟云散,大雪茫茫塔影空。
浪迹天涯停泊处,歌吟动地啸苍穹。
寂,迹,泊-入声
2007 12 31



七律 步韵奉和

癸亥追思韵步匆,取毫凝墨乐其中。
满园春色调花柳,半亩桑麻顺雨风。
衔此萧萧枫叶满,登时脉脉玉人空。
不堪容忍缠头价,冷酒凉茶结窟穹。


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PostPosted: 2009-01-14 08:22:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
祝贺秋兄商场诗坛双丰收
...


千山皑皑银龙锁
万水滔滔碧波催
好对耶。

谢谢岛主,也祝您新年快乐,万事如意!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-14 08:31:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

孬不好 wrote:
秋叶 wrote:
七律-回望 2007

人生回望又匆匆,岁晚沉思寥寂中。
所幸同俦微异己,尚存片瓦对寒风。
故人渺渺烟云散,大雪茫茫塔影空。
浪迹天涯停泊处,歌吟动地啸苍穹。
寂,迹,泊-入声
2007 12 31



七律 步韵奉和
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好诗,谢谢和作。

征下联
诗坛高手,多才才女急才至
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PostPosted: 2009-01-14 14:29:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

商场怪杰,善财财子散财来 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-01-15 06:06:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
七律-回望2008

风雪兼程渡岁关, 人生栈道越艰难。
商场碌碌谋柴米, 网络频频搜论坛。
股债金融颓势猛, 楼房价格跌声寒。。
庭前见惯花开落, 世道折腾迎鹤还。

碌,跌,折―入声
折腾-时髦用语,



七律 步韵奉和

自从甲子出幽关,日日吟哦蜀道难。
有意安排油与罐,无心挤兑醋和坛。
似乎凤蜡余悲浅,仿佛昙花尽夜寒。
好在泪珠脂粉敛,任君消受一嗔还。


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PostPosted: 2009-01-15 06:09:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

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征下联
诗坛高手,多才才女急才至



画苑小童,双眼眼珠瞠眼开


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PostPosted: 2009-01-15 10:12:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋斑,读诗有感

飘零莫叹一儒商
行迹匆匆为哪桩
劲节如君成色好
枫桥琥珀是华章
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PostPosted: 2009-01-15 11:57:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
商场怪杰,善财财子散财来 Laughing


岛主好对,平仄稍失对 Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-01-15 12:01:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

孬不好 wrote:
秋叶 wrote:

征下联
诗坛高手,多才才女急才至



画苑小童,双眼眼珠瞠眼开
...


好对,是这样瞠'really angly'还是这样'scarry'瞠?
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PostPosted: 2009-01-15 12:05:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
秋斑,读诗有感
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冰清老师,不敢当耶,谢谢和作。祝新春愉快!
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