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再贴短作 - <集市>问好朋友们

风动
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Posted: 2009-03-15 16:46:23 Post subject: 再贴短作 - <集市>问好朋友们

吵杂的集市河流飘浮着讨价还价的空瓶辛苦的手护卫着干瘪的蔬果我打坐于空白的树下仿佛走近钟声的前世 2009/2/7

hepingdao
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Posted: 2009-03-15 17:07:34 Post subject:

市闹而心静问好风动 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2009-03-15 17:16:36 Post subject:

小隐隐于野，中隐隐于市，大隐隐于朝于闹市而心静者, 诗(事)必成

nobody
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Posted: 2009-03-15 20:39:33 Post subject:

也想到了隐。有时小隐，有时中隐，有时大隐，这样比较有趣。反正到哪都能隐，都是隐， _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-03-15 23:39:26 Post subject:

我打坐于空白的树下仿佛走近钟声的前世 ——这首诗虽然短，却是精短，尤其最后2句，我有些感动了。这是很空灵的句子。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2009-03-16 02:48:20 Post subject:

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=21070 问候风动兄。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2009-03-18 15:49:15 Post subject:

谢谢和平岛/白水/nobody/杯中冲浪诸位朋友的阅评. 特别感谢冲浪兄弟的深度点评. 谢谢各位.

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