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[诗歌]父亲的白发延长了我的愧疚时间
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PostPosted: 2007-04-28 08:26:20    Post subject: [诗歌]父亲的白发延长了我的愧疚时间 Reply with quote

父亲的白发延长了我的愧疚时间[文/李智强]



昨晚,昨天晚上

我梦到童年,我幼稚得很,骑在父亲肩膀上

刚好我的肚脐眼看着父亲乌黑的壮年

父亲宽绰的臂膀摇醒了我呕奶气后的睡欲

梦里的情景我已然忘记,嘴角有无笑意?

可以肯定,拒绝父亲的闯入,只有我一个人

玩耍我未长大的童年



下午,厌烦工作的我,眼睛疲劳于32位颜色的荧屏

紧皱眉头,我今天完成了哪些工作?

父亲不知道,否则责备得我蜕变回儿时的畏缩

到时候,眼睛不会再累于高科技

而是父亲那非常朴实的气歪了的嘴角,叹出阵阵烟雾

还好,父亲在乡下守望他的“浅草不能没羊角”

每次的夕阳都得他撤走羊角,才落下去……



上个礼拜的今天,还是明天(父亲老是说他比我落后)?

我回老家帮着干农活,全然没了当年的把式。却还有人夸

太阳也累弯了腰,我和父亲抬着农具回家,不让母亲出力

我说:妈妈,我如今比爸爸还高了,重力活我干。

小心翼翼地走着田间小道,迎面的是傍晚的太阳

无意间我发现,父亲竟向夕阳俯首称臣了

我愣着神犹如抬一轮决意西沉的夕阳。万分哀绪



看看有点驼背的父亲,不敢置信。我看着

隔着一根肩上的扁担,父亲的白发赫然

时间。父亲。我看。说不出什么

晃若梦中,我从父亲的肩上坠地成人

如今高过了父亲,

也长于曾经挂我在一边的扁担

而父亲弯了,黑头发白了,我也厌烦工作了

对着电脑说累的人生。愧疚



晚上,不知道要梦什么。别是童年

不敢梦里厌烦工作,呆视电脑

父亲要骂,

可怎么办?



2007.4.28晚23:51临屏
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PostPosted: 2007-04-28 16:34:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候智强诗人!! Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-04-28 23:22:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

惭愧。问好海军兄。。。
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PostPosted: 2007-04-29 20:32:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

这首诗,见了就要顶!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-02 04:42:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢[金金]朋友,听了你的话很高兴。就不知道具体指哪方面?
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