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迪拜
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PostPosted: 2007-07-18 18:50:50    Post subject: <湖> Reply with quote
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走了,在溪头的女孩
昨夜,暴雨
在这里,本来是没有的

断枝,长了三年的
昨夜,她抓着
旋涡,打在我的眼睛
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阿依琼裙
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Joined: 09 Apr 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-07-18 18:53:56    Post subject: Reply with quote
简短的回味～
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踏过废墟,走来
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野航
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PostPosted: 2007-07-19 15:23:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
不错。留白很大。
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回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-07-19 16:13:50    Post subject: Reply with quote
久不见, 问好
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迪拜
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PostPosted: 2007-07-19 16:33:19    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢阿依琼裙

谢谢野航

谢谢白水先生
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PostPosted: 2007-07-19 23:48:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
女孩死了？
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jemmy
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 01:44:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
拜读
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 13:35:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
喜欢这首。短而精，并留下想像和回味！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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PostPosted: 2007-08-26 23:06:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
好的不说了：张力略显不足！！－－－－以本诗的构思和内容来看！
不才，愿交流！问好诗人
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