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小重山－初雪

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-11-14 17:02:50 Post subject: 小重山－初雪

挥洒飞空玉九州，看山川素秀、送今秋。品茗寻句赋文幽，无闲愁，景妙画中游。曾醉故乡丘，畅吟抒意后，乐新悠。光阴别去怎回眸，凭岁走，坐待冷梅稠。

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Posted: 2007-11-14 17:15:36 Post subject:

mm，你那儿下雪了？应该是晶莹的雪！品茗寻句赋文幽，无闲愁，景妙画中游。好！祝好！

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-11-14 19:11:48 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

mm，你那儿下雪了？应该是晶莹的雪！
品茗寻句赋文幽，无闲愁，景妙画中游。好！祝好！

gg好，我这昨天是下雪了。嗯，还行不太大。
谢谢gg点评！时时开心！

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Posted: 2007-11-14 19:23:42 Post subject:

很喜欢“曾醉故乡丘，畅吟抒意后，乐新悠。”。此醉非酒醉，乃陶醉。用得好！冬日凉，保健康。

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-11-14 22:15:17 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

很喜欢“曾醉故乡丘，畅吟抒意后，乐新悠。”。此醉非酒醉，乃陶醉。用得好！冬日凉，保健康。

谢谢gg点评，同时问候gg，愿gg和朋友们冬日快乐！

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-11-14 23:48:52 Post subject:

好羡慕．北京什么时候才能下雪呢．嗯．妹妹最近安好？ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-11-15 00:46:26 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

好羡慕．北京什么时候才能下雪呢．
嗯．妹妹最近安好？

姐姐好，我想你那很快就会飘雪了，别急啊！
谢谢姐姐，我挺好的。姐姐一定也很好吧？愿姐姐冬日开心快乐！ Razz

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Posted: 2007-11-15 15:22:00 Post subject:

“挥洒飞空玉九州”句，很有气势，句中“玉”字，以名词作动词用，既有颜色，又有动感。恰到好处。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2007-11-15 15:22:19 Post subject:

“挥洒飞空玉九州”句，很有气势，句中“玉”字，以名词作动词用，既有颜色，又有动感。恰到好处。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-11-15 15:37:41 Post subject:

‘挥洒飞空玉九州“句，颇有气势，句中的“玉”字活用，恰到好处，既有颜色，又有动感。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-11-15 16:10:08 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

“挥洒飞空玉九州”句，很有气势，

句中“玉”字，以名词作动词用，既有颜色，又有动感。恰到好处。

谢谢您的点评！冬日安好

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Posted: 2007-11-15 17:27:32 Post subject: Re: 小重山－初雪

莹雪 wrote:

挥洒飞空玉九州，看山川素秀、送今秋。
品茗寻句赋文幽，无闲愁，景妙画中游。

曾醉故乡丘，畅吟抒意后，乐新悠。
光阴别去怎回眸，凭岁走，坐待冷梅稠。

借MM佳句，续成一首：

梦故乡

曾醉故乡山丘，
诗燃天涯乡愁。
梦中几回故里，
情随江河奔流。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2007-11-15 17:27:55 Post subject: Re: 小重山－初雪

莹雪 wrote:

借MM佳句，续成一首：

梦故乡

曾醉故乡山丘，
诗燃天涯乡愁。
梦中几回故里，
情随江河奔流。

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-11-15 18:03:02 Post subject: Re: 小重山－初雪

qinghongh wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

借MM佳句，续成一首：

梦故乡

曾醉故乡山丘，
诗燃天涯乡愁。
梦中几回故里，
情随江河奔流。

GG的诗意境很好！谢谢GG续诗！

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