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[原创]五绝---秋夜

莹雪
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Posted: 2006-10-02 17:31:23 Post subject: [原创]五绝---秋夜

揽窗银钩照，风冷桂飘幽。谁弄轻灵乐，何人赋仲秋。

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Posted: 2006-10-08 18:55:13 Post subject:

揽窗银钩照，风冷桂飘幽。谁弄轻灵乐，何人赋仲秋。。。。。。。。。。。。。。清丽。欣赏。

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Posted: 2006-10-08 21:30:50 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

揽窗银钩照，风冷桂飘幽。
谁弄轻灵乐，何人赋仲秋。。。。。。。。。。。。。。清丽。欣赏。

谢谢点评！

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Posted: 2006-11-16 06:04:00 Post subject:

谁弄轻灵乐，何人赋仲秋。 ----一睡,一何,用的独特. _________________ 空钩久垂钓得烟波月醉

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Posted: 2006-11-16 17:09:01 Post subject:

又一方天 wrote:

谁弄轻灵乐，何人赋仲秋。

----一睡,一何,用的独特.

谢谢点评！

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Posted: 2006-12-18 01:54:06 Post subject:

谁弄轻灵乐　何人赋仲秋独自赋仲秋？　是否比较有变化。。。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

莹雪
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Posted: 2006-12-18 16:25:04 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

谁弄轻灵乐　何人赋仲秋

独自赋仲秋？　是否比较有变化。。。

。。

你的这句不错。但和我的意境不太相符。谢谢关注！

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