莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-26 17:11:19 Post subject: 今夜不想吟咏月光 |
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今夜不想吟咏月光
因有无数名句
来感叹此时
何许苦思心律
而我只需品茗回味
不必似小女孩儿学绣
描摹花样
今夜不想吟咏月光
因有无数名句
来感叹此时
何许苦思心律
那桂花浓烈的气息
如酒般迷醉
过多言语
今夜不想吟咏月光
因有无数名句
来感叹此时
何许苦思心律
会搅扰这如霜的苍茫
所以别怪我沉默
就让清辉倾泻
让我在清辉里沐浴
把坎坷经历洗涤 |
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杨海军 进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007 Posts: 2205 Location: 吉林 杨海军Collection |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-26 22:18:54 Post subject: |
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谢谢! |
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阿依琼裙 秀才

Joined: 09 Apr 2007 Posts: 920 Location: 废墟之上 阿依琼裙Collection |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-27 00:19:46 Post subject: |
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| 阿依琼裙 wrote: |
| 排比的句列很少见了~~这样的表达另有韵味! |
谢谢关注! |
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沙漠 秀才
Joined: 26 Jan 2007 Posts: 977 Location: 中国温州 沙漠Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-27 03:59:51 Post subject: |
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让我在清辉里沐浴
把坎坷经历洗涤
喜欢这. _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-27 19:40:16 Post subject: |
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| 沙漠 wrote: |
让我在清辉里沐浴
把坎坷经历洗涤
喜欢这. |
谢谢! |
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