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今夜不想吟咏月光
莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-09-26 17:11:19    Post subject: 今夜不想吟咏月光 Reply with quote


今夜不想吟咏月光
因有无数名句
来感叹此时
何许苦思心律
而我只需品茗回味
不必似小女孩儿学绣
描摹花样

今夜不想吟咏月光
因有无数名句
来感叹此时
何许苦思心律
那桂花浓烈的气息
如酒般迷醉
过多言语

今夜不想吟咏月光
因有无数名句
来感叹此时
何许苦思心律
会搅扰这如霜的苍茫
所以别怪我沉默
就让清辉倾泻
让我在清辉里沐浴
把坎坷经历洗涤
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PostPosted: 2007-09-26 18:42:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

意境 优美,很是喜欢!!
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-09-26 22:18:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
意境 优美,很是喜欢!!
谢谢!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-26 22:49:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

排比的句列很少见了~~这样的表达另有韵味!
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踏过废墟,走来
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-09-27 00:19:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

阿依琼裙 wrote:
排比的句列很少见了~~这样的表达另有韵味!
谢谢关注!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-27 03:59:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

让我在清辉里沐浴
把坎坷经历洗涤

喜欢这.
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-09-27 19:40:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

沙漠 wrote:
让我在清辉里沐浴
把坎坷经历洗涤

喜欢这.

谢谢!
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