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[原创]七绝—杏花

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Posted: 2011-05-10 22:48:04 Post subject: [原创]七绝—杏花

俏艳娇容更雪漫，精舒妙韵伴云飞。闲池照影身初瘦，雅苑歌诗体越肥。

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Posted: 2011-05-11 12:52:04 Post subject:

照影身初瘦，歌詩体越肥，这一瘦一肥之间，尽显诗人不能自已的由衷的喜悦。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-05-11 13:14:15 Post subject:

杏花艳，诗词香。

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Posted: 2011-05-12 17:36:44 Post subject:

图诗俱佳。欣赏问好。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2011-05-12 21:45:38 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

照影身初瘦，歌詩体越肥，
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谢谢您点评！问好

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Posted: 2011-05-12 21:47:20 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

杏花艳，诗词香。

谢谢qinghong点评！问好

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Posted: 2011-05-12 21:48:38 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

图诗俱佳。欣赏问好。

谢谢点评！问好

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Posted: 2011-05-13 00:42:44 Post subject:

雪漫时闲池是否已冻成冰了？闲池照影身初瘦，象秋天。问好~~~~ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2011-05-13 01:16:44 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

雪漫时闲池是否已冻成冰了？闲池照影身初瘦，象秋天。问好~~~~

拜托，金金，你一句一句的问好吧，怎么把起句连同转句一同问呀？
好吧，先回答首句“雪”，不知金金晓得不晓得，杏花初开红艳，而后就开的粉白，直至摇落。用“雪漫”是形容花的粉白。
至于转句的“闲池照影身初瘦”，是杏花临池初开时是那样纤首弱小。和秋无关。
问好∽∽∽∽

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Posted: 2011-05-15 22:27:50 Post subject:

o ,买噶的！：）误会你了， _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2011-05-16 01:13:18 Post subject:

呵呵，谢谢金金

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