莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2011-01-12 18:06:40 Post subject: 点降唇-辞岁 |
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玉蕊盈窗,
尽舒冬日寒风冽。
梅含笑靥,
旧岁新辞别。
笔赋诗行,
语述经年雪。
如轻蝶,
若梦奇绝,
不久化水泻。
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2011-01-12 18:47:56 Post subject: |
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| 莹雪飘飘如轻蝶。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2011-01-12 21:43:13 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
| 莹雪飘飘如轻蝶。 |
问好qinghongGG |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2011-01-13 05:58:15 Post subject: |
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玉蕊盈窗,莹雪赋詩。问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2011-01-13 07:40:59 Post subject: |
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玉蕊、梅笑、輕蝶 - 词风清新! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2011-01-13 15:56:19 Post subject: |
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谢谢您的点评!问好! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2011-01-13 16:02:58 Post subject: |
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| 白云闲人 wrote: |
| 玉蕊、梅笑、輕蝶 - 词风清新! |
谢谢白云点评! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2011-01-13 19:36:00 Post subject: |
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| MM 好诗,喜欢 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2011-01-14 17:52:03 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
| MM 好诗,喜欢 |
谢谢姐姐鼓励。我回帖好好费尽哦! |
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