| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
 Joined: 28 Sep 2006
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 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-17 22:45:36    Post subject: 红窗听一叹春 |   |  
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				| 窗外风狂沙乱舞, 寒又顾、
 柳芽轻绿。
 闲来无事书词后,念桃花园趣。
 
 觅得流莺歌转处,
 新装好、
 身如蝶梦。
 春难久住,
 问谁伤感,可知何时续?
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		| 黄洋界 探花
 
  
 Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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 Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-18 15:28:59    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 又见"柳芽青绿", 
 殷勤留春久住!问好莹雪!
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 喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰
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		| qinghongh 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-18 16:30:57    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 春虽来,难久住。莹雪MM伤春词。 风狂沙乱舞。三燕故都风沙很大吗?
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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 Location: TORONTO
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-18 17:21:25    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 问好妹妹 |  | 
	
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		| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
 Joined: 28 Sep 2006
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-18 17:37:07    Post subject: |   |  
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谢您点评!问好! 
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	  | 又见"柳芽青绿", 
 殷勤留春久住!问好莹雪!
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		| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-18 17:39:59    Post subject: |   |  
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没有伤春,有些感慨而已 
	  | qinghongh wrote: |  
	  | 春虽来,难久住。莹雪MM伤春词。 风狂沙乱舞。三燕故都风沙很大吗?
 |    是啊!我们这风沙很大的。
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		| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-18 17:41:27    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 问好姐姐 |  | 
	
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		| 米运刚 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 19 Mar 2009
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-19 14:17:27    Post subject: |   |  
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				| “春难久住, 问谁伤感,可知何时续?”
 
 从来春光苦短,没奈何,只把新词度。问好!
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		| 白云闲人 探花
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-19 16:18:19    Post subject: |   |  
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				| "觅得流莺歌转处",好句! 问好!
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 笛里关山.
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		| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-19 17:19:39    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢点评!问好 |  | 
	
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		| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-19 17:20:55    Post subject: |   |  
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谢谢,问好! 
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	  | "觅得流莺歌转处",好句! 问好!
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