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荷叶铺水面<江南荷, 塞北枫>

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-05 14:45:45 Post subject: 荷叶铺水面<江南荷, 塞北枫>

荷叶铺水面<江南荷, 塞北枫> 霜天远目, 秋浓隐碧苔娇荷百媚北疆开梦回故里客? 万屻焱红笑我呆临风任去来翩翩戏冷雨, 醉了美酒红腮曲径漫徘徊浅墨弄闲词, 思雅斋

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-11-05 16:42:34 Post subject:

我先欣赏。抢个JJ的沙发等回和完闻山。再和JJ

qinghongh
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Posted: 2007-11-05 16:50:52 Post subject:

白水好词！

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-11-05 18:06:45 Post subject: Re: 荷叶铺水面<江南荷, 塞北枫>

白水 Moonlight wrote:

荷叶铺水面<江南荷, 塞北枫>

霜天远目, 秋浓隐碧苔
娇荷百媚北疆开
梦回故里客?
万屻焱红笑我呆

临风任去来
翩翩戏冷雨, 醉了美酒红腮
曲径漫徘徊
浅墨弄闲词, 思雅斋

荷叶铺水面－和白水JJ
夕阳耀目，幽池弄翠苔。芳容绽放立波开。
问谁是旧客？逝水笑人竟犯呆。

风云任意来，休怨雨萦怀，何苦酒醉香腮？
步闲觅叶秀，雪沁更红衣，书韵斋。

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黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-11-06 08:34:43 Post subject:

白水好词，莹雪好和。 “浅墨弄闲词，思雅斋“，清幽雅致。 “思雅斋“是您的书房名吗？如果需要，愿为兄涂鸦。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

秋叶
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Posted: 2007-11-06 17:04:27 Post subject: Re: 荷叶铺水面<江南荷, 塞北枫>

白水 Moonlight wrote:

怎么又写荷叶啊，且越写越长，越有韵味呢 Laughing

征尘载袖
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Posted: 2007-11-07 03:15:33 Post subject:

邀棋共茗，多情不与苔。闲拈菊叶说花开。煮些瘦损话，满座半醺次第呆。朋辞友又来。清汤泛菜梗，蟹脚作弄虾腮。筷子莫迂徊，可取露风餐，清素斋。 ^_^ _________________

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-09 21:45:48 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

白水好词，莹雪好和。

“浅墨弄闲词，思雅斋“，清幽雅致。

“思雅斋“是您的书房名吗？如果需要，愿为兄涂鸦。

黄老师, 太谢谢你了. 这两天业余时间忙第四期选稿, 编辑, 没顾上看这个帖, 真不好意思. Embarassed

你送我的扇子已经照了照片, 我抽空贴上来. 很漂亮, 特喜欢.

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-09 21:48:54 Post subject:

谢谢莹雪, 袖袖MM的词. 你们写的真好. 谢谢QINGHONGH和秋香MM的鼓励. 问好.

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-11-20 20:00:44 Post subject:

好意境．学习。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-21 17:01:08 Post subject:

问好暗香

qxz-123456
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Posted: 2007-11-23 02:49:44 Post subject:

好词，学习。问好。 _________________ 齐喜章(智发）智发雅居http://qxzzzzz.blog.sohu.com/

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