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PostPosted: 2007-09-10 11:33:36    Post subject: 怡园, 又一个秋天 Reply with quote

怡园, 又一个秋天

你看, 西芹的脉络
涨满
九月的记忆
如弦, 被葱白的手指
弄醒

秋日的石榴
炸开来, 透亮的
如你袒露的胸怀炸开封存经年的
蓝田美玉

向日葵低下了头颅
不敢再看老去的太阳
把满腔余热化为
如血的残红

如果种瓜真的得瓜
那么种豆?
谁用豆箕点燃了西天的香炉
昨日的晚餐
我端起满盏溶融的红豆, 回眸

铜雀台上空的明镜
月光溢出来
在一双眼睛里
滚动着
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PostPosted: 2007-09-10 12:17:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗人的秋天特别多。
诗人的秋天特别早。

洋溢着古典美。
女性细腻柔软的笔触。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-10 13:57:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这样带着古典美的诗。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-10 14:15:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

NND! 去怡园!! 太美了,哪儿也不想了,就去怡园啦,这个假期。

呵呵呵,白水好 :)
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PostPosted: 2007-09-10 16:33:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
诗人的秋天特别多。
诗人的秋天特别早。

洋溢着古典美。
女性细腻柔软的笔触。


是TORONTO的秋天早. 我的小花(菜)园能吃的DD几乎被我们吃光了 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-09-10 16:36:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦 wrote:
喜欢这样带着古典美的诗。


是吗? 可能是被我的神仙MM们的美酒灌醉了. 再加上最近总为宋朝的词人们打工 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-09-10 16:43:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗!!!你看, 西芹的脉络
涨满
九月的记忆
如弦, 被葱白的手指
弄醒

秋日的石榴
炸开来, 透亮的
如你袒露的胸怀炸开封存经年的
蓝田美玉

向日葵低下了头颅
不敢再看老去的太阳
把满腔余热化为
如血的残红
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PostPosted: 2007-09-10 16:43:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

七小姐 wrote:
NND! 去怡园!! 太美了,哪儿也不想了,就去怡园啦,这个假期。

呵呵呵,白水好 :)

好啊, 我这好多神仙MM呢, 再加一个白水大帅哥就随你们飘起来了 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-09-10 16:47:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
好诗!!!你看, 西芹的脉络
涨满
九月的记忆
如弦, 被葱白的手指
弄醒

秋日的石榴
炸开来, 透亮的
如你袒露的胸怀炸开封存经年的
蓝田美玉

向日葵低下了头颅
不敢再看老去的太阳
把满腔余热化为
如血的残红


谢谢海军. 除了那石榴和红豆是超市买的, 其它都是我种的. 长的好小 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-09-10 18:48:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
nobody wrote:
诗人的秋天特别多。
诗人的秋天特别早。

洋溢着古典美。
女性细腻柔软的笔触。


是TORONTO的秋天早. 我的小花(菜)园能吃的DD几乎被我们吃光了 Very Happy


OTTAWA的秋天可能比TORONTO还要早一点, 欢迎到OTTAWA赏秋观枫。

“诗人的秋天特别早。” 说的好!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-10 19:04:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

闲雅 wrote:


OTTAWA的秋天可能比TORONTO还要早一点, 欢迎到OTTAWA赏秋观枫。


有机会一定去. 他乡客也在OTTAWA, 你们有见过吗 Confused
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 00:10:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

情景交融...
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 03:59:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

铜雀台上空的明镜
月光溢出来
在一双眼睛里
滚动着

不错,赏读
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 09:06:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

好啊,白水是帅哥啊!

——哪个舍命骗我的,说你是mm来着?七七一时想不起是谁,等藕想起来,扁死他!


!!!!!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 09:27:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

写的好美,怡园,白水妹妹的菜园,秋天丰收了啊~
我只种草,而且是不需要太浇水的,幸亏连阴雨这段时间一直下,草又活过来了 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 11:03:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

七小姐 wrote:
好啊,白水是帅哥啊!

——哪个舍命骗我的,说你是mm来着?七七一时想不起是谁,等藕想起来,扁死他!

!!!!!


明明是美女(替补),怎么就成帅哥了?糊涂ing.
是否夫妻俩人用这个id? 白水哥哥 + moon light 妹妹?
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 11:59:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

新华 wrote:
情景交融...


谢谢理解, 问好.
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 12:01:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

郭文沫 wrote:
铜雀台上空的明镜
月光溢出来
在一双眼睛里
滚动着

不错,赏读


谢谢喜欢, 多提不足.问好.
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 12:03:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

七小姐 wrote:
好啊,白水是帅哥啊!

——哪个舍命骗我的,说你是mm来着?七七一时想不起是谁,等藕想起来,扁死他!


!!!!!


哈, 七七, 君子动口不动手 no 1
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PostPosted: 2007-09-11 12:06:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
写的好美,怡园,白水妹妹的菜园,秋天丰收了啊~
我只种草,而且是不需要太浇水的,幸亏连阴雨这段时间一直下,草又活过来了 Very Happy


月亮, 我小花园菜吃完了, 花还有点. 草也不少 Very Happy
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