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怡园遐思
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PostPosted: 2007-07-23 17:45:49    Post subject: 怡园遐思 Reply with quote

怡园遐思

(一)

不再张扬的是你
拾起的魅
在百花盛开的时节
合拢颤动的早春
蜷缩那些曾经的隐痛
如一颗心
把鲜红输入秋的脉络

(二)

笑开一串喇叭
轻舒柔臂
想去捕捉夏日的风么?
何必虚张你的鞭
君不见, 痴情的牛郎
已在耕田

(三)

不要对我
佯青你的脸
有气? 那就气吧
遮羞的叶儿, 藏不住
俏笑的红唇

(四)

梁兄去了, 唯有玉笛
潺潺, 小提琴
绷断了和弦, 系不住采蝶
翩翩
别说, 露珠
是西天滑落的月儿
昨晚, 一滴泪水溢满
两千年的眷恋
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沙漠
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PostPosted: 2007-07-23 18:27:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

小巧精致.
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PostPosted: 2007-07-23 18:50:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

写得很精巧

君不见, 痴情的牛郎
已在耕田
Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-23 19:09:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

节奏很好 ~
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-07-23 19:24:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢三位朋友鼓励.
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2007-07-28 00:28:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

舒展自在。欣赏。
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-07-28 01:27:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

轻灵剔透
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PostPosted: 2007-07-28 02:14:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

写得清新自然 拜读并学习Smile
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-07-28 08:02:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位朋友.
那天去花园浇花, 就写了写那些小生灵.
(一)是我种的瓜花蔫结果的瞬间(二)是牵牛花(三)是红绿相间的西红柿(四) 是飘飘欲飞的蝴蝶兰
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PostPosted: 2007-07-29 03:16:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
谢谢各位朋友.
那天去花园浇花, 就写了写那些小生灵.
(一)是我种的瓜花蔫结果的瞬间(二)是牵牛花(三)是红绿相间的西红柿(四) 是飘飘欲飞的蝴蝶兰


形象,小巧~问好月光~
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-07-29 14:53:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

昨晚, 一滴泪水溢满
两千年的眷恋

意蕴深刻!!好!问候白水诗人!!!!!!!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-30 20:18:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢. 问好月亮, 杨海军.
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PostPosted: 2007-07-30 20:39:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈哈,喜欢四。
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PostPosted: 2007-08-03 06:55:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
哈哈,喜欢四。

我喜欢西红柿 Wink

其实任何有生之命都有喜怒哀乐 Razz
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PostPosted: 2007-08-03 15:10:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

这组也不错!!!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-02 22:24:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

标题很有诗情,匆匆奔来,害了一场单相思,直触心的深处。学习。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-02 23:17:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

严谨而灵巧
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PostPosted: 2007-09-03 11:32:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢两位朋友鼓励.
若得闲暇, 还盼多提意见. 问好 Very Happy
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