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PostPosted: 2011-01-07 18:57:28    Post subject: 死门 Reply with quote

死门
题记:如果物质真的不灭,那么灵魂?

(一)
那盏灯笼灭了, 萤火虫的灯笼
熄灭的恰是时候
如果你的体能再也载不动
莫如轻身,轻身的你可以自由自在地飞
我信,在黑暗中飞翔的
一定会追赶光明

(二)
风也会哭的
你听不见,是因为我把它关在门外
陪伴着哗啦啦的落叶
言不由衷的笑语
电流那端,似乎也有几片叶儿
沙沙作响的语无伦次
搅乱了风声

(三)
朋友,我只是想说
当人们不加思索的曲膝而跪
那唯一不跪的就成了神。
我无法
仅仅钟情于一尊高贵的偶像
却以为血肉之躯更应该无所顾忌的站立
让不朽的古木
置身于永远的年轻


(四)
梦没有价值,期望
没有价值
你,也没有
如果梦想未能成真

但我知道
你的价值恰好在价值之外
没有天上的浮云
哪有地上的雨水?
你看,路旁青青的草尖
多像她长长的睫毛
眼角,挂着鲜活的露珠


(五)
“芝麻开门”
只是轻声一唤
门就开了。蝙蝠,乌鸦,那些死去的魂灵
扑棱棱地一齐飞出来
飞着飞着,就飘起了鹅毛大雪
白净白净的
好暖和的被褥

我不敢掀动
生怕惊醒梦中的婴儿
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PostPosted: 2011-01-07 19:50:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

感觉很好,唯美,思想性也好
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PostPosted: 2011-01-07 22:45:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

感觉很轻灵~~任何时候看到喜欢的作品都能获得安慰~~
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PostPosted: 2011-01-08 10:59:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢peace和红红的鼓励
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PostPosted: 2011-01-09 15:11:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

那么,你抓住的是?

当我从沉思醒来 ,恍悟惊喜:原来,人是因饿着才吃、困了便睡
一切价值无不体现在过剩情志的基础上

除了诗被偶发性的发现并赞颂 ,我们依然生存状态中,而生活离我们很远......
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PostPosted: 2011-01-09 16:59:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

枯蝶 wrote:
那么,你抓住的是?
当我从沉思醒来 ,恍悟惊喜:原来,人是因饿着才吃、困了便睡
一切价值无不体现在过剩情志的基础上

除了诗被偶发性的发现并赞颂 ,我们依然生存状态中,而生活离我们很远......
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谢谢你的思索,很高兴有你这样的诗友。
我觉得,活在梦中,是悲剧, 无梦而活则可谓行尸走肉了。
死与生,破与立,梦与醒,这道门就看我们怎样理解。
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PostPosted: 2011-01-13 21:06:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

“血肉之躯更应该无所顾忌的站立 ”

这样的思想醒目也令读者静下来思索。
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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 18:53:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

回一个帖子,看看。
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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 18:57:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi, 冲浪,看来登陆成功 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 18:57:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

再发一个。 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 19:03:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy Very Happy

这回死门又活了。 可否告知从哪个门进来的?可别说是从窗子跳进北美枫的

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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 19:06:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

晴宝儿 wrote:
“血肉之躯更应该无所顾忌的站立 ”这样的思想醒目也令读者静下来思索。

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谢谢宝儿的理解和鼓励。周末愉快。 Very Happy
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