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				|  发表于: 2010-11-30 10:00:30    发表主题: Memory |   |  
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				| <Memory> 
 What is in our hearts is hard to share
 Yet it keeps reminding us
 of its existence
 
 In the peace of night, a spider intrudes my dream
 it spins, and measures the road under the moonlight
 It is a long road for you and me
 and an unforgettable one in my life
 
 The wind blows through my hair
 like somebody whispering in my ear
 the memory is persistent
 but hard to share
 
 
 <At the time>
 
 You flew away
 and left a shadow with me
 I stare onto the lake
 a silver bird passes through clouds
 a willow waves at me
 I ask: "Do you miss him? "
 but no one answers
 I look around
 there is only silence
 
 
 <Sunrise>
 
 I sit by the window
 waiting for you
 with the city in a dream
 
 It is soon time, I know
 you must be on the road
 I listen anxiously
 for your steps
 
 Oh, my love
 you tear the ocean's waves
 and jump on her bosom
 with a smile so sweet
 like a child
 
 I open the door silently
 just waiting for you
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				| The love can go through the distance and the time. |  | 
	
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				| well done 
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  发表于: 2010-11-30 12:51:49    发表主题: |   |  
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	  | The love can go through the distance and the time. |  
 thanks, qinghongh. maybe you can send it to wen
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	  | well done 
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	  | a willow waves at me ...
 |  呵呵,楊柳依依!
 
 It is soon time?soon多餘。
 It is time一般不是用來表示將要發生的事的,而是說something ought to happen or be done now。如It is time we were going. 我们该走了。
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	  | a willow waves at me ...
 |  呵呵,楊柳依依!
 It is soon time?soon多餘。
 It is time一般不是用來表示將要發生的事的,而是說something ought to happen or be done now。如It is time we were going. 我们该走了。
 
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 谢谢玨。 我刚开始写的就是It is time, 后来请英文老师帮我看看,她加上了soon,可能更准确些?我很少这样用,暂时先留着吧
   
 等待你的新诗, 问好周末。
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