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白水
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Posted: 2010-06-20 12:11:26 Post subject: 邻家小妹

邻家小妹绿衫婀娜，玉佩叮咚邻家小妹熟了熟在深深的庭院出墙不是红杏消魂处遮遮掩掩的樱桃小口欲言却止，止于咬破的唇滴滴殷红沁出些许酸酸甜甜的滋味，我避了你自个儿细细地品可观，不可流口水

hepingdao
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Posted: 2010-06-20 12:17:17 Post subject:

酸酸甜甜的滋味自当细品 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2010-06-20 12:30:19 Post subject:

猜得出写的什么吗

hepingdao
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Posted: 2010-06-20 12:55:01 Post subject:

我性愚钝，真不知道是桃红柳绿，还是杨梅熟了吞下去的，便当是人参果子，什么味道，什么味道 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2010-06-20 14:15:06 Post subject:

相信一定有人比你聪明，等等看。不过给你的答案可稍有不不同

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Posted: 2010-06-20 14:22:17 Post subject:

秋叶后宫，佳丽三千。紫红小口，缠缠绵绵。娇羞遮面，挤眉弄眼。左张又望，无从挑选。邀来好友，上下评点。拍手称快，笑越栅栏。

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Posted: 2010-06-20 14:35:28 Post subject:

哦，我想起有句子若是琵琶能结果，满城洞箫皆开花 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2010-06-20 19:10:59 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

秋叶后宫，佳丽三千。
紫红小口，缠缠绵绵。
娇羞遮面，挤眉弄眼。
左张又望，无从挑选。
邀来好友，上下评点。
拍手称快，笑越栅栏。

庆红，你晕死我

猜想秋叶已经笑到卧床不起了，，，，，， Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2010-06-20 19:21:01 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

哦，我想起有句子

若是琵琶能结果，满城洞箫皆开花

Laughing

别琵琶能结果，洞箫皆开花的
你的小猴玉照最适合吃蟠桃 Wink

我们昨天可是在秋叶家大闹后宫，临走还意犹未尽，每人又带回家百十个靓妹妹，胃痛 Razz

秋叶
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Posted: 2010-06-21 14:45:17 Post subject:

二位大作岛主是猜不着的，待我有空把图片贴上

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Posted: 2010-06-21 15:01:02 Post subject:

邻家小妹佩叮咚婀娜樱桃水玲珑白水弯弓射明月秋叶骑马邀庆宏 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2010-06-21 17:20:46 Post subject:

哈哈，开始猜谜语了，是桃吧。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

白水
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Posted: 2010-06-21 18:46:11 Post subject:

秋叶，qinghongh 古韵的大版主耶，等绝招冲浪好，有时需要放放松。你要在就更热闹了啦，那天大家为秋叶挑MM，又爬梯子又上树的，晕死

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Posted: 2010-06-22 07:35:51 Post subject:

当成荔枝吧~~水是中俺的大爱~~反正瞅着模样的和它差不多~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2010-06-22 07:39:32 Post subject:

开始真误以为是写妹妹滴~~想想这诗意味悠远哦~~没成想是水果~~白水骗过了俺不止一次了~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2010-06-23 08:35:06 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

邻家小妹佩叮咚
婀娜樱桃水玲珑
白水弯弓射明月
秋叶骑马邀庆宏

Very Happy

后宫佳丽下凡来，带笑含羞红艳腮。
秋叶香茶邀友聚，云梯相会是瑶台。

Laughing

白水
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Posted: 2010-06-23 14:50:01 Post subject:

安红红 wrote:

开始真误以为是写妹妹滴~~想想这诗意味悠远哦~~没成想是水果~~白水骗过了俺不止一次了~~ Very Happy

没骗阿，花果树木原本就是我们的兄弟姐妹。写诗歌，有时就是一乐。问好红 Very Happy

邻家小妹

绿衫婀娜，玉佩叮咚 -----树冠婀娜，树叶叮咚
邻家小妹熟了------ 邻家果儿熟了
熟在深深的庭院
出墙
不是红杏 -----是樱桃

消魂处
遮遮掩掩的樱桃小口 ------树丛里藏着呢
欲言却止，止于咬破的唇 ------顾不上说话了，忙着咬樱桃（小口）
滴滴殷红-----樱桃汁

沁

出

些许
酸酸甜甜的滋味，我避了----（吃相难免不雅，所以躲起来狂吃 Wink

）
你自个儿

细

细

地

品

白水
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Posted: 2010-06-23 15:06:12 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

邻家小妹佩叮咚
婀娜樱桃水玲珑
白水弯弓射明月
秋叶骑马邀庆宏

Very Happy

后宫佳丽下凡来，带笑含羞红艳腮。
...

两位博士华山论剑呢？好功力。

加油：

樱桃树下宾客来，蒸文酿墨醉紫腮
庆宏流韵喝瓶倒，秋叶鼾声震瑶台
--------（和平岛）
Wink

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-06-23 15:33:56 Post subject:

改一字：后宫佳丽下凡来，带笑含羞红艳腮。秋叶香茶邀友聚，云梯相会到瑶台。秋叶长醉不醒不肯献技。

白水
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Posted: 2010-06-23 15:40:30 Post subject:

改得更贴切了。你们一个个像悟空似的，立于天地之间。秋叶还在那醉他的樱桃美酒呢今天下午地震感觉到了吗？

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