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七绝* 浅寐未央
白水
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PostPosted: 2009-12-29 14:17:00    Post subject: 七绝* 浅寐未央 Reply with quote

七绝* 浅寐未央

(一)

独系兰舟咏碧莲,折弯晓月伴孤帆,
沾巾弱水湿长夜,不肯浊流浸远山。

(二)

月沉西窗又五更, 灯芯剪断袅诗魂,
不知浅梦终结处, 是否低吟寄故人?
(2009.12.28 )
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PostPosted: 2009-12-29 14:19:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水兄好诗!情深意远。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-12-29 14:25:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2009-12-29 20:06:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

画意情深!

问好白水 Moonlight,新年快乐!
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 11:43:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好连南河, 新年快乐!
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PostPosted: 2009-12-31 19:27:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

字字真切感人。(之二)以问作结,深婉含蓄,诗尽,而味永!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-01 11:15:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好冰清老师, 这两首诗歌的灵感来自与你的交谈,更是为你女性的美德所感动
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PostPosted: 2010-03-20 11:39:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
问好冰清老师, 这两首诗歌的灵感来自与你的交谈,更是为你女性的美德所感动

呵呵,白水言重。灵感来自你的敏悟和善性。不是吗? 上善若水! 感动,随一首:

夜夜心/ 冰清

人间何事可销魂?
带断鸳鸯夜夜心。
纵是韜吟能解语,
三更惊梦拭啼痕。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-20 15:18:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

唱和俱佳!
問好冰清!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-20 21:08:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢冰请老师的和诗,收藏了。
问好白云老师
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PostPosted: 2010-03-21 02:22:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

沾巾弱水湿长夜,不肯浊流浸远山。

问好白水!至性至情,刚直不阿!佳句大赏!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-25 20:04:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢笑聊,有段时间没写古韵,见笑 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2010-03-26 09:11:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

請白水多临古韵新音指导! 謝謝!
问好白水!
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