白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-12-29 14:17:00 Post subject: 七绝* 浅寐未央 |
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七绝* 浅寐未央
(一)
独系兰舟咏碧莲,折弯晓月伴孤帆,
沾巾弱水湿长夜,不肯浊流浸远山。
(二)
月沉西窗又五更, 灯芯剪断袅诗魂,
不知浅梦终结处, 是否低吟寄故人?
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2009-12-29 14:19:58 Post subject: |
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白水兄好诗!情深意远。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-12-29 14:25:51 Post subject: |
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谢谢qinghongh |
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连南河 秀才
Joined: 30 Aug 2008 Posts: 342 Location: Toronto 连南河Collection |
Posted: 2009-12-29 20:06:28 Post subject: |
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画意情深!
问好白水 Moonlight,新年快乐! _________________ 一路雨丝一路风 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-12-30 11:43:19 Post subject: |
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问好连南河, 新年快乐! |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2009-12-31 19:27:43 Post subject: |
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字字真切感人。(之二)以问作结,深婉含蓄,诗尽,而味永! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2010-01-01 11:15:20 Post subject: |
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问好冰清老师, 这两首诗歌的灵感来自与你的交谈,更是为你女性的美德所感动 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2010-03-20 11:39:41 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
问好冰清老师, 这两首诗歌的灵感来自与你的交谈,更是为你女性的美德所感动 |
呵呵,白水言重。灵感来自你的敏悟和善性。不是吗? 上善若水! 感动,随一首:
夜夜心/ 冰清
人间何事可销魂?
带断鸳鸯夜夜心。
纵是韜吟能解语,
三更惊梦拭啼痕。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-03-20 15:18:04 Post subject: |
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唱和俱佳!
問好冰清! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2010-03-20 21:08:21 Post subject: |
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谢谢冰请老师的和诗,收藏了。
问好白云老师 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-03-21 02:22:37 Post subject: |
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沾巾弱水湿长夜,不肯浊流浸远山。
问好白水!至性至情,刚直不阿!佳句大赏! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2010-03-25 20:04:19 Post subject: |
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谢谢笑聊,有段时间没写古韵,见笑  |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-03-26 09:11:25 Post subject: |
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請白水多临古韵新音指导! 謝謝!
问好白水! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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