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白水
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Posted: 2009-04-30 12:38:46 Post subject: 三十亩地一头牛

三十亩地一头牛〈火哥〉四月喊春喊醒了三十亩地和小鸟一起伸出粉嫩的舌尖我不敢碰只怕一碰就会吐出一朵花来，这些火红火红的花儿噢，每张一次嘴巴就喊一声哥哥〈竹马〉横跨大西洋水域直捣彼岸夹一箸香丝海棠花儿就开了，张开粉嘟嘟的唇花蕊飘逸浓雾的长发遮眼。不看也罢只骑竹马，多么实惠的方言 “骑”便是 “吃”。男人的嘴不善言，不吟诗张嘴只吃吃一个弥勒大肚，撑船有余〈青梅〉青梅青青青青的梅子不吐蜜，只煮酒煮酒也不论英雄，不论三十亩地只论一头牛，论一头牛的犄角可否真有海量？

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Posted: 2009-04-30 13:25:28 Post subject:

非常好的三首诗！喜欢。问候白水兄。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

云冰之南
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Posted: 2009-04-30 15:23:30 Post subject:

最喜第一首的明快流畅! _________________ 江西赣州罗方义电子信箱：fangyi-66@163.com 博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/fangyi66

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Posted: 2009-04-30 16:43:06 Post subject:

很明朗 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

野航
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Posted: 2009-04-30 17:14:37 Post subject:

〈火哥〉 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

野航
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Posted: 2009-04-30 17:15:47 Post subject:

下面这个春情勃发：四月喊春喊醒了三十亩地和小鸟一起伸出粉嫩的舌尖我不敢碰只怕一碰就会吐出一朵花来，这些火红的花儿噢，每张一次嘴巴就喊一声哥哥 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

白水
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Posted: 2009-04-30 19:25:15 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

非常好的三首诗！喜欢。问候白水兄。

海军，好久没读到你的诗歌了，等你的新作。

白水
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Posted: 2009-04-30 19:31:05 Post subject:

云冰之南 wrote:

最喜第一首的明快流畅!

是吗？谢谢。不过想悄悄告诉你，我最喜欢这段：
男人的嘴不善言，不吟诗
张嘴只吃
吃一个弥勒大肚，撑船有余

Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2009-04-30 19:33:46 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

很明朗

是，写这几首诗歌时乐得直傻笑 Wink

白水
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Posted: 2009-04-30 19:37:54 Post subject:

野航 wrote:

下面这个春情勃发：
...

问好野航。猜想你我感觉相近，Toronto 冬天长，春天一到特高兴，大家都乐得“咯咯“ 傻笑 Very Happy

赵福治
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Posted: 2009-05-01 00:02:23 Post subject:

煮酒也不论英雄，不论三十亩地只论一头牛，论一头牛的犄角可否真有海量？ ....姐姐最近状态一直很好,提读.

安红红
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Posted: 2009-05-01 03:40:34 Post subject:

俺来乐乐的~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

白水
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Posted: 2009-05-01 05:25:23 Post subject: 先放这儿

偷来的

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Posted: 2009-05-01 14:03:59 Post subject:

喜欢第一个，哈哈。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
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Posted: 2009-05-01 14:13:28 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

煮酒也不论英雄，不论
...

问好福治。这是半个月前写的，瞎忙，没顾上打出来。 Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2009-05-01 14:16:51 Post subject:

安红红 wrote:

俺来乐乐的~

红红，乐就好。写（读）诗歌也是一种快乐 Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2009-05-01 14:21:19 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

喜欢第一个，哈哈。

给点暗示，读2和3时，试想坐在火锅桌旁边，感觉是不是有所不同？ Razz

赵福治
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Posted: 2009-05-02 22:58:30 Post subject:

青梅青青青青的梅子不吐蜜，只煮酒煮酒也不论英雄，不论 ........一如禅意洒脱的文字.再读.

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Posted: 2009-05-04 03:58:43 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

喜欢第一个，哈哈。

都喜欢。问好牛，牛节快乐 Very Happy

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Posted: 2009-05-04 09:18:58 Post subject:

一种境界，水都能煮成酒 _________________ 倒悬壶子的人

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