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秀,可餐?(外两首)
白水
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 09:32:38    Post subject: 秀,可餐?(外两首) Reply with quote

静夜无思

远离冬至
三月的白昼越拉越长,长到
足以绽放桃花。夜,短了
是好事。文人墨客省了许多纸笔
还有湿透的鲛绡
一觉
就是天明


坦然

怕墨痕散淡, 污了透明的脚印
怕炙手的电流熔化冷却的星
怕,怕就怕九天银河一起泼下来也洗不干净
跌入红尘的瞳孔

你说,不怕
阳光下每一棵树都拖着
灰色的影子


秀,可餐?

距离拉开,这样
俏皮的雀斑
不再是晦气的泪痣
星星点点的羞涩

从怡园抽身
做一个巧手厨娘
让诗词流韵,淘洗湘莲,黑米
忽闻窗外香风,飘来江南梨花
还有姐姐的
烧饼,金灿灿的挂在夜空。

乐得偷懒,燃一炉温火煲粥
再切一碟相思的发菜
今夜的晚餐,你
可喜欢?
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 10:34:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢,再蘸点色就更好了 ugly and silly
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 11:48:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
喜欢,再蘸点色就更好了 ugly and silly


好啊,那就给你加点颜色Very Happy Very Happy

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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 15:35:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

乐得偷懒,燃一炉温火煲粥
再切一碟相思的发菜
今夜的晚餐,你
可喜欢?

听说发菜已经不多。流口水。问好。节日快乐!
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2009-03-08 03:53:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

你说,不怕
阳光下每一棵树都拖着
灰色的影子

这几首古典,清雅~节日快乐! Very Happy
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-03-08 04:39:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:

乐得偷懒,燃一炉温火煲粥
再切一碟相思的发菜
今夜的晚餐,你
可喜欢?

听说发菜已经不多。流口水。问好。节日快乐!
...


自己都不知道怎么会写下厨,读了你的回帖才想起妇女节要来临了. Very Happy
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-03-08 04:40:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
你说,不怕
阳光下每一棵树都拖着
灰色的影子

这几首古典,清雅~节日快乐! Very Happy
...


问好月亮. 节日快乐. Very Happy
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野航
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PostPosted: 2009-03-08 05:31:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

静夜无思 却有诗
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PostPosted: 2009-03-08 09:43:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

这几首都不错~喜欢~
坦然写得好精致~
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PostPosted: 2009-03-08 22:22:29    Post subject: 人家要色香味俱全嘛 :lol: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:

好啊,那就给你加点颜色Very Happy Very Happy


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PostPosted: 2009-03-09 02:32:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

总是精致.喜欢.
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PostPosted: 2009-03-09 04:26:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

乐得偷懒,燃一炉温火煲粥
再切一碟相思的发菜
今夜的晚餐,你
可喜欢?

这样的结尾好喜欢~~
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PostPosted: 2009-03-09 09:02:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

从怡园抽身
做一个巧手厨娘
让诗词流韵,淘洗湘莲,黑米
忽闻窗外香风,飘来江南梨花
还有姐姐的
烧饼,金灿灿的挂在夜空。

乐得偷懒,燃一炉温火煲粥
再切一碟相思的发菜
今夜的晚餐,你
可喜欢?

柔情起来可真厉害,哈哈
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PostPosted: 2009-03-13 14:47:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

野航 wrote:
静夜无思 却有诗


哈, 野航,这是白天写的 Wink
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PostPosted: 2009-03-13 14:48:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢 红红,骨笛,阿姨(怎么成阿姨了,瞧这字打的 Razz

没人, 何时来多伦多,一定让你尝尝秋叶的手艺 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-03-13 14:57:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

晴宝儿 wrote:
从怡园抽身
做一个巧手厨娘
让诗词流韵,淘洗湘莲,黑米
忽闻窗外香风,飘来江南梨花
还有姐姐的
烧饼,金灿灿的挂在夜空。

乐得偷懒,燃一炉温火煲粥
再切一碟相思的发菜
今夜的晚餐,你
可喜欢?

柔情起来可真厉害,哈哈
...


要不你们真把我当大帅哥可就麻烦了 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-03-13 15:09:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,白水就是白水.
没有过多的华丽,多生活中的平淡.看着就解渴.
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PostPosted: 2009-03-15 02:35:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

后现代刀子 wrote:
呵呵,白水就是白水.
没有过多的华丽,多生活中的平淡.看着就解渴.


问好小刀。比较怕疼,只好平平淡淡了 Wink
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