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秀，可餐？(外两首)

白水
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Posted: 2009-03-07 09:32:38 Post subject: 秀，可餐？(外两首)

静夜无思远离冬至三月的白昼越拉越长，长到足以绽放桃花。夜，短了是好事。文人墨客省了许多纸笔还有湿透的鲛绡一觉就是天明坦然怕墨痕散淡，污了透明的脚印怕炙手的电流熔化冷却的星怕，怕就怕九天银河一起泼下来也洗不干净跌入红尘的瞳孔你说，不怕阳光下每一棵树都拖着灰色的影子秀，可餐？距离拉开，这样俏皮的雀斑不再是晦气的泪痣星星点点的羞涩从怡园抽身做一个巧手厨娘让诗词流韵，淘洗湘莲，黑米忽闻窗外香风，飘来江南梨花还有姐姐的烧饼，金灿灿的挂在夜空。乐得偷懒，燃一炉温火煲粥再切一碟相思的发菜今夜的晚餐，你可喜欢？

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Posted: 2009-03-07 10:34:39 Post subject:

喜欢，再蘸点色就更好了 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
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Posted: 2009-03-07 11:48:07 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

喜欢，再蘸点色就更好了 ugly and silly

好啊,那就给你加点颜色 Very Happy

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-03-07 15:35:09 Post subject:

乐得偷懒，燃一炉温火煲粥再切一碟相思的发菜今夜的晚餐，你可喜欢？听说发菜已经不多。流口水。问好。节日快乐！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-03-08 03:53:25 Post subject:

你说，不怕阳光下每一棵树都拖着灰色的影子这几首古典，清雅~节日快乐！

白水
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Posted: 2009-03-08 04:39:14 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

乐得偷懒，燃一炉温火煲粥
再切一碟相思的发菜
今夜的晚餐，你
可喜欢？

听说发菜已经不多。流口水。问好。节日快乐！
...

自己都不知道怎么会写下厨,读了你的回帖才想起妇女节要来临了. Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2009-03-08 04:40:18 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

你说，不怕
阳光下每一棵树都拖着
灰色的影子

这几首古典，清雅~节日快乐！ Very Happy
...

问好月亮. 节日快乐. Very Happy

野航
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Posted: 2009-03-08 05:31:48 Post subject:

静夜无思却有诗 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

安红红
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Posted: 2009-03-08 09:43:43 Post subject:

这几首都不错～喜欢～坦然写得好精致～ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

nobody
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Posted: 2009-03-08 22:22:29 Post subject: 人家要色香味俱全嘛 :lol:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

好啊,那就给你加点颜色 Very Happy

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骨笛
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Posted: 2009-03-09 02:32:10 Post subject:

总是精致.喜欢. _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2009-03-09 04:26:59 Post subject:

乐得偷懒，燃一炉温火煲粥再切一碟相思的发菜今夜的晚餐，你可喜欢？这样的结尾好喜欢~~ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

晴宝儿
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Posted: 2009-03-09 09:02:27 Post subject:

从怡园抽身做一个巧手厨娘让诗词流韵，淘洗湘莲，黑米忽闻窗外香风，飘来江南梨花还有姐姐的烧饼，金灿灿的挂在夜空。乐得偷懒，燃一炉温火煲粥再切一碟相思的发菜今夜的晚餐，你可喜欢？柔情起来可真厉害，哈哈 _________________ 晴宝儿

白水
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Posted: 2009-03-13 14:47:21 Post subject:

野航 wrote:

静夜无思却有诗

哈，野航，这是白天写的 Wink

白水
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Posted: 2009-03-13 14:48:57 Post subject:

谢谢红红，骨笛，阿姨（怎么成阿姨了，瞧这字打的）没人，何时来多伦多，一定让你尝尝秋叶的手艺

白水
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Posted: 2009-03-13 14:57:55 Post subject:

晴宝儿 wrote:

从怡园抽身
做一个巧手厨娘
让诗词流韵，淘洗湘莲，黑米
忽闻窗外香风，飘来江南梨花
还有姐姐的
烧饼，金灿灿的挂在夜空。

乐得偷懒，燃一炉温火煲粥
再切一碟相思的发菜
今夜的晚餐，你
可喜欢？

柔情起来可真厉害，哈哈
...

要不你们真把我当大帅哥可就麻烦了 Very Happy

后现代刀子
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Posted: 2009-03-13 15:09:17 Post subject:

呵呵,白水就是白水. 没有过多的华丽,多生活中的平淡.看着就解渴. _________________ 88年的。

白水
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Posted: 2009-03-15 02:35:04 Post subject:

后现代刀子 wrote:

呵呵,白水就是白水.
没有过多的华丽,多生活中的平淡.看着就解渴.

问好小刀。比较怕疼，只好平平淡淡了 Wink

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