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PostPosted: 2009-01-18 06:21:40    Post subject: 偏方 Reply with quote
偏方

它山之石, 可以攻玉
却不能用来捣碎同仁堂的那把
浮小麦
煎一盏酸枣仁
这是一剂绝妙的
镇静良药

其实, 对于 “疯” 的狂热
无需降温
更无需用手无缚鸡之力
今夜, 让我借你的方
治你的病
所谓其人之道还治其人
之身. 如若不治
诊为绝症

Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-01-18 08:03:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
绝症

绝什么都好
唯有搅拌机硕大的肚囊
日夜轰鸣
我梦见了自己
痛饮河渭, 不足
就用它山之石充饥

银河的另一厢
金星
迸射而出
我胸怀之症
哪里是一个绝字
能够了得
Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-01-18 10:56:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
诊为绝唱
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PostPosted: 2009-01-18 15:13:23    Post subject: Reply with quote
以我的医学知识和经验,这个方子好像是治消化不良的,对吗?
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PostPosted: 2009-01-18 20:53:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
言外之意 弦外之音
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PostPosted: 2009-01-19 18:07:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
绝症

绝症

绝什么都好
唯有搅拌机硕大的肚囊
日夜轰鸣
我梦见了自己
痛饮河渭, 不足
就用它山之石充饥

银河的另一厢
金星
迸射而出
我胸怀之症
哪里是一个绝字
能够了得

...


胸有"金星",太白该乐了 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-01-19 18:08:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
nobody wrote:
诊为绝唱


哈, 是么 Confused
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PostPosted: 2009-01-19 18:13:11    Post subject: Reply with quote
野航 wrote:
以我的医学知识和经验,这个方子好像是治消化不良的,对吗?


悄悄告知, 那方子是治疗失眠的, 浮小麦和酸枣仁煮水当茶喝就行, 特灵 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-01-19 18:24:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
曲元奇 wrote:
言外之意 弦外之音


谢谢元奇. 这诗歌原本是开个玩笑, 写完才发现挺有共性.每个人都知道去开导他人, 却忘了自己,其实用开导他人的话开导自己是最好的.所以索性贴出来留给自己看吧, 哈哈一乐Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-01-19 18:30:12    Post subject: Reply with quote
对于 “疯” 的狂热
这是一剂绝妙的
镇静良药
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PostPosted: 2009-01-20 16:46:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
骨笛 wrote:
对于 “疯” 的狂热
这是一剂绝妙的
镇静良药


很高兴得到你的认可 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-01-21 06:42:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
治疗失眠??


笑~~那我可得去试试~~如果好,要谢白水了~~Smile))
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 13:42:53    Post subject: Reply with quote
阿依琼裙 wrote:
治疗失眠??


笑~~那我可得去试试~~如果好,要谢白水了~~Smile))


哈, 你一定别忘记在喝安眠茶的同时读这首诗. Wink

不过有时也会不灵. 比如那天我用说别人的话对自己说11.30PM 之后睡觉不利健康, 于是破天荒的早早上床, 没想到睡到半夜就醒了(可能因为没喝茶) Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 22:01:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
很有意味。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-28 15:41:48    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢理解, 问好轻风
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