白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-20 06:18:23 Post subject: 通灵宝玉 |
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通灵宝玉
月亮胖了
圆圆的,象个顽皮的孩子
爬上窗栏又嗗碌碌滚落
我急步庭院
只看见一块冰冷的石头
绕青蛇旋乌龙
风月, 风月原本无边啊
谁幡然醒来,谁
继续梦着? |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-20 07:57:45 Post subject: |
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还是风月无边? |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-20 08:43:07 Post subject: |
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明月, 还不睡觉?
和<风月无边>那本书没关.
是石头梦吧  |
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nobody 进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006 Posts: 2651 Location: Madtown nobodyCollection |
Posted: 2008-07-21 16:29:26 Post subject: |
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开始也以为是那书呢。想,风月不但没边,还没完没了呢,哈哈
谁幡然醒来,谁
继续梦着? _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-21 16:57:32 Post subject: |
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nobody wrote: |
开始也以为是那书呢。想,风月不但没边,还没完没了呢,哈哈
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没人, 看来你是睡醒的那个
醒来就好, 天热, 多灌点水. 我最近瞎忙, 菜园的小西红柿都因缺水掉了好多  |
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nobody 进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006 Posts: 2651 Location: Madtown nobodyCollection |
Posted: 2008-07-21 17:01:59 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
nobody wrote: |
开始也以为是那书呢。想,风月不但没边,还没完没了呢,哈哈
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没人, 看来你是睡醒的那个
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菜园的小西红柿,哈哈哈哈
我呀,这里昏天黑地,忙着承上启下呢。。。
开创资本主义新纪元,容易吗我  _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-21 17:06:15 Post subject: |
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nobody wrote: |
白水 Moonlight wrote: |
nobody wrote: |
开始也以为是那书呢。想,风月不但没边,还没完没了呢,哈哈
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没人, 看来你是睡醒的那个
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菜园的小西红柿,哈哈哈哈
我呀,这里昏天黑地,忙着承上启下呢。。。
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昏天黑地
你可别又睡着了, 顺便把你冲浪兄叫回来, 冲冲浪你就彻底醒了  |
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司马策风 举人

Joined: 03 Dec 2006 Posts: 1211 Location: 温哥华 司马策风Collection |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-22 15:49:02 Post subject: |
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问好司马  |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-23 05:03:26 Post subject: |
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第一段形象,第二段有蕴涵. |
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沙漠 秀才
Joined: 26 Jan 2007 Posts: 977 Location: 中国温州 沙漠Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-23 05:51:31 Post subject: |
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这样的小诗很合我味 _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-23 18:16:56 Post subject: |
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谢谢鼓励 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-23 18:18:41 Post subject: |
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沙漠 wrote: |
这样的小诗很合我味 |
谢谢. 随手写点轻松的, 也是一乐  |
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朱煜国 秀才
Joined: 26 Jan 2008 Posts: 121
朱煜国Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-25 02:45:59 Post subject: 玉佩 |
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随便写点,信手拈来就是诗。
还“争"<风月无边>那本书吗?都是我惹的祸/哈后 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-26 06:30:04 Post subject: |
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朱煜国 wrote: |
随便写点,信手拈来就是诗。
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问好。何时能见到你的大作  |
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莞君 秀才
Joined: 20 Oct 2007 Posts: 561 Location: 中国 陕西 莞君Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-26 08:10:19 Post subject: |
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写的机智 有回味 问好姐姐 _________________ 莞君 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-27 02:09:54 Post subject: |
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久不见你写诗歌了, 近来怎样? 问好  |
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新华 秀才
Joined: 29 Jul 2007 Posts: 225
新华Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-27 17:50:21 Post subject: |
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我瘦了,也还在做梦、、、学习,问好。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-28 17:25:54 Post subject: |
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别梦,长胖点
问好  |
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