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通灵宝玉

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Posted: 2008-07-20 06:18:23 Post subject: 通灵宝玉

通灵宝玉月亮胖了圆圆的，象个顽皮的孩子爬上窗栏又嗗碌碌滚落我急步庭院只看见一块冰冷的石头绕青蛇旋乌龙风月，风月原本无边啊谁幡然醒来，谁继续梦着？

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-07-20 07:57:45 Post subject:

还是风月无边？

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Posted: 2008-07-20 08:43:07 Post subject:

明月, 还不睡觉? 和<风月无边>那本书没关. 是石头梦吧

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Posted: 2008-07-21 16:29:26 Post subject:

开始也以为是那书呢。想，风月不但没边，还没完没了呢，哈哈谁幡然醒来，谁继续梦着？ _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-07-21 16:57:32 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

开始也以为是那书呢。想，风月不但没边，还没完没了呢，哈哈 Very Happy

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没人, 看来你是睡醒的那个 Wink

醒来就好, 天热, 多灌点水. 我最近瞎忙, 菜园的小西红柿都因缺水掉了好多 Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-07-21 17:01:59 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

nobody wrote:

开始也以为是那书呢。想，风月不但没边，还没完没了呢，哈哈 Very Happy

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没人, 看来你是睡醒的那个 Wink

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菜园的小西红柿，哈哈哈哈

我呀，这里昏天黑地，忙着承上启下呢。。。

开创资本主义新纪元，容易吗我 Laughing

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Posted: 2008-07-21 17:06:15 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

nobody wrote:

开始也以为是那书呢。想，风月不但没边，还没完没了呢，哈哈 Very Happy

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没人, 看来你是睡醒的那个 Wink

...

菜园的小西红柿，哈哈哈哈

我呀，这里昏天黑地，忙着承上启下呢。。。
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昏天黑地

你可别又睡着了, 顺便把你冲浪兄叫回来, 冲冲浪你就彻底醒了 Razz

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Posted: 2008-07-21 20:12:30 Post subject:

有些调皮.有些意趣. _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2008-07-22 15:49:02 Post subject:

司马策风 wrote:

有些调皮.有些意趣.

问好司马

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Posted: 2008-07-23 05:03:26 Post subject:

第一段形象,第二段有蕴涵.

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Posted: 2008-07-23 05:51:31 Post subject:

这样的小诗很合我味 _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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Posted: 2008-07-23 18:16:56 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

第一段形象,第二段有蕴涵.

谢谢鼓励

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Posted: 2008-07-23 18:18:41 Post subject:

沙漠 wrote:

这样的小诗很合我味

谢谢. 随手写点轻松的, 也是一乐 Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-07-25 02:45:59 Post subject: 玉佩

随便写点，信手拈来就是诗。还“争"<风月无边>那本书吗?都是我惹的祸/哈后

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Posted: 2008-07-26 06:30:04 Post subject:

朱煜国 wrote:

随便写点，信手拈来就是诗。
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问好。何时能见到你的大作 Confused

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Posted: 2008-07-26 08:10:19 Post subject:

写的机智有回味问好姐姐 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2008-07-27 02:09:54 Post subject:

莞君 wrote:

写的机智有回味问好姐姐

久不见你写诗歌了, 近来怎样? 问好 Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-07-27 17:50:21 Post subject:

我瘦了，也还在做梦、、、学习，问好。

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Posted: 2008-07-28 17:25:54 Post subject:

别梦,长胖点问好

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