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通灵宝玉
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PostPosted: 2008-07-20 06:18:23    Post subject: 通灵宝玉 Reply with quote

通灵宝玉

月亮胖了
圆圆的,象个顽皮的孩子
爬上窗栏又嗗碌碌滚落

我急步庭院
只看见一块冰冷的石头
绕青蛇旋乌龙
风月, 风月原本无边啊
谁幡然醒来,谁
继续梦着?
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PostPosted: 2008-07-20 07:57:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

还是风月无边?
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PostPosted: 2008-07-20 08:43:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

明月, 还不睡觉?

和<风月无边>那本书没关.
是石头梦吧 Smile
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PostPosted: 2008-07-21 16:29:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

开始也以为是那书呢。想,风月不但没边,还没完没了呢,哈哈 Very Happy

谁幡然醒来,谁
继续梦着?
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PostPosted: 2008-07-21 16:57:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
开始也以为是那书呢。想,风月不但没边,还没完没了呢,哈哈 Very Happy
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没人, 看来你是睡醒的那个 Wink
醒来就好, 天热, 多灌点水. 我最近瞎忙, 菜园的小西红柿都因缺水掉了好多 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-07-21 17:01:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
nobody wrote:
开始也以为是那书呢。想,风月不但没边,还没完没了呢,哈哈 Very Happy
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没人, 看来你是睡醒的那个 Wink
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菜园的小西红柿,哈哈哈哈

我呀,这里昏天黑地,忙着承上启下呢。。。

开创资本主义新纪元,容易吗我 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-07-21 17:06:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
nobody wrote:
开始也以为是那书呢。想,风月不但没边,还没完没了呢,哈哈 Very Happy
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没人, 看来你是睡醒的那个 Wink
...



菜园的小西红柿,哈哈哈哈

我呀,这里昏天黑地,忙着承上启下呢。。。
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昏天黑地 Shocked
你可别又睡着了, 顺便把你冲浪兄叫回来, 冲冲浪你就彻底醒了 Razz
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PostPosted: 2008-07-21 20:12:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

有些调皮.有些意趣.
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PostPosted: 2008-07-22 15:49:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

司马策风 wrote:
有些调皮.有些意趣.


问好司马 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-07-23 05:03:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

第一段形象,第二段有蕴涵.
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PostPosted: 2008-07-23 05:51:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

这样的小诗很合我味Smile
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PostPosted: 2008-07-23 18:16:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
第一段形象,第二段有蕴涵.


谢谢鼓励
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PostPosted: 2008-07-23 18:18:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

沙漠 wrote:
这样的小诗很合我味Smile


谢谢. 随手写点轻松的, 也是一乐 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-07-25 02:45:59    Post subject: 玉佩 Reply with quote

随便写点,信手拈来就是诗。
还“争"<风月无边>那本书吗?都是我惹的祸/哈后
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PostPosted: 2008-07-26 06:30:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

朱煜国 wrote:
随便写点,信手拈来就是诗。
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问好。何时能见到你的大作 Confused
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PostPosted: 2008-07-26 08:10:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

写的机智 有回味 问好姐姐
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PostPosted: 2008-07-27 02:09:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

莞君 wrote:
写的机智 有回味 问好姐姐


久不见你写诗歌了, 近来怎样? 问好 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-07-27 17:50:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

我瘦了,也还在做梦、、、学习,问好。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-28 17:25:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

别梦,长胖点

问好 Very Happy
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