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PostPosted: 2008-07-02 18:27:15    Post subject: 中国商人 Reply with quote

中国商人

习惯了把手放在他的手心入睡。夜半,身边空空,文倩从梦中惊醒。那是怎样一个梦啊,她在机场望着越飞越远的飞机,身边的他走了,雪花从月光里撒下来,好冷。

她起身,披了件淡荷色睡袍,轻轻走进书房。他朝她摆摆手,又指指电话,意思是他正在忙,让她先睡。文倩无奈,端一杯温水给他,返身回到卧室。

第二天,旧戏重演。当第三个夜晚文倩从梦中醒来时, 她心中充满了委曲。自打出国, 他们平静的生活就被打乱了。她不再是依人的小鸟,丈夫这原本扮演大树的角色的人,反而变成了候鸟,一会在天上飞, 一会在水上漂,家好象只是他在北国的一个窝。有朋友对文倩说, 小心点, 生意场可是个天高任鸟飞的地儿,他可别飞的找不到北了。好在文倩天生怕酸,不喜欢吃醋,淡然笑答:“找的到北的自然会回来,那找不到北的,又何必留恋呢?” 这回轮到让朋友叹了:“WOW,这话可不象出自女人之口。” 女人?怎样才象女人。文倩躺在床上,看着从窗帘缝里渗出来的月光,思绪越飘越远。北美的女人是独立的,就象这月亮, 听说月亮是从地球飞出去的,难道北美的女人真的是那根被上帝抽出去的肋骨么?整天围着地球转,却……, 却什么?谁让加拿大的夜晚恰好是中国的上班时间,能怨他么?可他也犯不着夜夜如此啊。夜,是最软弱的时空,文倩感到的鼻尖凉凉的,眼泪好象从来就特别偏爱女人。

文倩不想再起身,开始默默地数羊“一只羊, 两只羊……五十只羊”,夜很静, 静的让人无法入睡。突然,她听见书房传来他兴奋的声音:“已经上路了?太好了。要快, 现在灾区急需帐篷,你们要以最快的速度运过去。”“灾区?帐篷?” 文倩疑惑了, 丈夫是作国际贸易的, 怎么会发货到灾区?正想着,他闯进卧室:“货已经发运了。程峰够义气,一听是救灾物品就说所有的费用由他承担。我说行, 下一单货你付账。” 文倩坐起身看着他:“原来这几天你在忙这事啊?看来无奸不商这话不全对。” 他笑了:“SORRY,这几天忙晕了,没来得及告诉你。” 文倩甜丝丝地笑了,象鱼一样地游回进梦乡。

在梦中, 她看见好多好多大雁驮着好多好多帐篷从南向北飞着。
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2008-07-03 05:24:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好白水君!
从远地、从侧面写“抗震救灾”,有悬念、有新意。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-04 18:24:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

好个有情有义君子商人。问好商人及商人夫人!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-05 22:41:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

的确很有新意的,可以当小说了!发到散文这里可让人对号入座了啊!呵呵!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-07 12:14:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水一向善长写情感故事.
而这篇,把关乎国家、人民安危的大事和个人的情思,自然、平实地揉在一起,就更显得铺陈细腻,生发巧妙.
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PostPosted: 2008-07-10 17:27:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
问好白水君!
从远地、从侧面写“抗震救灾”,有悬念、有新意。

谢谢道模. 在这次"抗震救灾"中, 听到不少类似的事, 所以想写下来, 作个留存吧.
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PostPosted: 2008-07-10 17:29:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
好个有情有义君子商人。问好商人及商人夫人!



HI, QINGHONG, 替商人们及商人夫人们谢谢你. 问好 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-07-10 17:30:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦 wrote:
的确很有新意的,可以当小说了!发到散文这里可让人对号入座了啊!呵呵!


问好荷梦, 希望能有更多的对号入座Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-07-10 17:40:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
白水一向善长写情感故事.
而这篇,把关乎国家、人民安危的大事和个人的情思,自然、平实地揉在一起,就更显得铺陈细腻,生发巧妙.
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谢谢冰清老师. 这次抗震救灾, 我们身边发生了太多感人的事, 商人,学生, 工作人员,,,,,,,人们善良的本性有如地心之热,从地裂的夹逢中不可遏制的喷发出来,,,,,,,有很多想写的东西, 只是时间和精力不允许. 这篇文章基本上是记实文字吧, 还盼你们多批评 Embarassed
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