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Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2007-10-06 15:12:15 Post subject: 谢幕 |
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《谢幕》
风歇了,树枝上
想了整个秋天的一张叶子
有一只蚂蚁
扛着漆黑的大象
月亮的足迹
印在推和敲的门槛
时间随蚂蚁
一步步挪动
天边的一颗星星
眨了眨,磕睡的眼
终于,都忍不住
掉了下来
掌声响起
风悄悄地回头看
不见了主角 |
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jemmy 秀才

Joined: 06 Jun 2007 Posts: 414 Location: china jemmyCollection |
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桔子 秀才

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 214
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Posted: 2007-10-06 16:02:58 Post subject: |
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风悄悄地回头看
不见了主角
就这样谢幕了 |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2007-10-06 16:30:46 Post subject: |
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这一首与情于景,推敲地很到位~ |
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蓝冰 秀才
Joined: 20 Sep 2007 Posts: 115
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Posted: 2007-10-06 17:23:13 Post subject: |
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人生如戏, 戏散人终
掌声和鲜花不过道具, 只有灵魂才是永存的 |
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