hepingdao
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 Posted: 2011-05-13 06:31:07 Post subject: 游石龙山 |
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5月10日游烈士陵园
拉着姐姐和妹妹的手
缓缓地向前探去
她们哭喊着
但我听不清，只是在想
今夜的天空多像一片黑纱
而星星，又仿佛是一朵朵洁白的小花
啊，又一朵小花从此凋谢
游石龙山
一串清脆的银铃从石阶滚落下来
忽然记起
我是从上一世纪返回的
回首，那个熟悉的身影消失了
有青苔爬过脚掌
只剩下一半
石化了的脚印
另一半
留在了前世
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白水
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| Posted: 2011-05-13 09:29:50 Post subject: |
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而那凋谢的， 蕴藏着永恒
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冰清
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| Posted: 2011-05-13 10:26:22 Post subject: |
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深沉，凝重。感人!
久不见，问好! |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2011-05-13 10:54:07 Post subject: |
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| 小花的精灵，融入了未知的世界。。。成为永恒的记忆 |
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秋叶
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| Posted: 2011-05-13 12:46:43 Post subject: |
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| 黑夜降临，星光闪烁，天地无声，祈祷永生。 |
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2011-05-13 14:27:26 Post subject: |
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感谢白水、冰清、情宏和秋叶兄
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上城
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| Posted: 2011-05-13 21:04:32 Post subject: |
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岛主渐渐沉寂了，不见往日的激情了
不晓得是不是受了洛夫的启发，绚烂之后归于平淡
静水流深。
岛主的诗，不管何时都要大赞一个
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上城
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| Posted: 2011-05-13 21:19:19 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
而那凋谢的， 蕴藏着永恒
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白水的紫荆花冠给岛主戴上。也传一张照片：
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叶英儿
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| Posted: 2011-05-19 04:05:21 Post subject: 写的真好。 |
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| 写的真好。 |
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