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轮渡·白水是谁

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Posted: 2010-06-17 11:08:48 Post subject: 轮渡·白水是谁

轮渡·白水是谁洛夫问我他是在读《印象白水》的中央发问的四周都是水声我猛然回顾惊愕于她那一身红装素裹竟一时记不起她的名或许她就是我孩提时光的落满童趣的黄金走廊或许是某次远行我偶然涉过的一条小溪她总说自己是无题但我回答，她是冬天里绽放的那一抹笑容四周都是水声我猛然回顾洛老夫子终于忍无可忍忽然大笑着寻着水声跳了下去白水就这样抿着嘴站了起来 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2010-06-17 13:32:49 Post subject:

白水何处寻，苍茫一水间。

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Posted: 2010-06-17 19:52:28 Post subject:

好诗。

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Posted: 2010-06-17 19:54:00 Post subject:

感谢二位批阅问好 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2010-06-17 20:39:22 Post subject:

有趣味的表达,诗意的视觉! _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

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Posted: 2010-06-17 22:24:35 Post subject:

感谢吟啸徐行的点评 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2010-06-18 05:58:06 Post subject:

白水是一条丰富的小溪~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2010-06-18 13:17:02 Post subject:

喜欢这首诗歌 1）因为有我的笔名，小虚荣心得以三分钟的满足 2）最喜欢这一段：惊愕于她那一身红装素裹竟一时记不起她的名或许她就是我孩提时光的落满童趣的黄金走廊或许是某次远行我偶然涉过的一条小溪她总说自己是无题但我回答，她是冬天里绽放的那一抹笑容这段诗歌使得“白水” 的寓意得以扩展，也回答了“白水是谁” 这个标题的提问。 “白水”这个笔名（代号）可以是任何人，可以是《北美枫》杂志所有的编辑与作者。当今社会，当一些人忙于到处吹嘘，宣传自己的时候，很高兴看到有许多朋友（比如山城子，冰清，冲浪，黄洋界，等许多老师和朋友）对友情的珍视，文友们身上的一点亮点他们都会发现并鼓励。这些良好的作风，奠定了一个网站好的风气。谢谢peace, 虽然对你常借我的笔名开涮小有余怒。却欣赏你诗歌表达的内涵，以及办《北美枫》的初衷（就是为了使更多的文学爱好者的作品得以传播）。就让你借用吧，大不了赶明儿我换个笔名

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Posted: 2010-06-18 13:41:52 Post subject:

这是在雪楼，洛夫家里的情景他读我写的这篇《印象白水》，我便给他介绍你他发现了引用的第一首诗歌，少了题目，够晕的，这就是这里说的无题，也算一种自我超脱：）他也喜欢你的《瀑布》这诗歌便从这里打开了视角 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2010-06-18 13:49:35 Post subject:

是。《踏雪寻梅》漏了，还有一些小的差错，看来校对还需加强。若方便，代我问好洛夫老师。如有机会，一定去拜访老先生。谢谢。

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Posted: 2010-06-18 13:52:48 Post subject:

也算是阴差阳错，成就了这里的无题，倒也是另一番境界 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2010-06-19 04:53:53 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

也算是阴差阳错，成就了这里的无题，倒也是另一番境界

找理由。有标题和没标题可大不同了, 的确另一番境界 Wink

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Posted: 2010-06-19 04:56:12 Post subject:

白水是水 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

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Posted: 2010-06-19 05:37:51 Post subject:

写的自然,语意行文也别具.

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Posted: 2010-06-19 05:45:50 Post subject:

骨笛 wrote:

白水是水

没错，于是这位就借水流韵，骨笛悠悠吹出了《北美枫》一个又一个文人墨客 Very Happy

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Posted: 2010-06-19 08:52:17 Post subject:

生動立體！ _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2010-06-19 22:16:19 Post subject:

白水何处寻，苍茫一水间。 _________________ 陕西姜华

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