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《来做客的落花生》

山城子
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Posted: 2007-09-08 00:21:50 Post subject: 《来做客的落花生》

《来做客的落花生》文/ 山城子你引见它们来泥土满身满脸好亲切我请它们洗浴白生生朴实出干净然后坐下说话（未时记） ——2007-9-7于文化村

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-09-08 01:04:22 Post subject:

这首比毛毛雨好能否改易下你引见它们来泥土满身满脸好亲切我请它们洗浴白生生朴实出干净然后坐下来说话老伴卫生间诸词虽然生活化有亲切感,但不要频繁入诗. 诗有质性.班门弄斧了.见谅.我很欣赏先生的诗歌 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

山城子
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Posted: 2007-09-08 01:26:40 Post subject:

好老乡！就这样吧！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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