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网上的朋友请你停一停——读帖有感

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Posted: 2013-07-10 18:48:00 Post subject: 网上的朋友请你停一停——读帖有感

网上的朋友请你停一停——读帖有感文/ 山城子辗转回帖几个诗歌论坛我看到了贴诗的朋友一个个都很忙乱忙得倾倒垃圾一样扔下就走仿佛停一停就像被老师罚站乱得打了错白就那样错白着仿佛写完了检查一遍就不够神仙问题是你不读别人的作品你自己语言的偏颇就没有办法发现而对于那些美丽婀娜缤纷妩媚也无从体验，因而也无从借鉴与其匆匆忙忙地打造一些莫名其妙实在不如十年磨一利剑网上的朋友请你停一停别只孤单地驰骋八万里虚空茫茫而颠静下心来看看思思思思看看这样好的交流平台别当成个人的舞台只给自己表演 2013-7-11临屏 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2013-07-10 21:10:38 Post subject:

哈哈，支持山城子老师，问候辛苦了！

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Posted: 2013-07-10 21:11:46 Post subject:

问一下山城子老师，在《北美枫》怎么才能发表诗文，请教！多有叨扰见谅——诚祝工作愉快！

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Posted: 2013-07-11 00:34:52 Post subject:

有交流才有收获 _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

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Posted: 2013-07-11 09:05:41 Post subject:

“辗转回帖几个诗歌论坛我看到了贴诗的朋友一个个都很忙乱忙得倾倒垃圾一样扔下就走仿佛停一停就像被老师罚站乱得打了错白就那样错白着仿佛写完了检查一遍就不够神仙问题是你不读别人的作品你自己语言的偏颇就没有办法发现而对于那些美丽婀娜缤纷妩媚也无从体验，因而也无从借鉴与其匆匆忙忙地打造一些莫名其妙实在不如十年磨一利剑 ” 同感。在某个论坛里，有君每日可发数首“诗歌”，还几乎天天发。实在不舒服，我出来了。可是，居然～ _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-07-11 19:38:15 Post subject:

李庆贺 wrote:

问一下山城子老师，在《北美枫》怎么才能发表诗文，请教！多有叨扰见谅——诚祝工作愉快！

多交流，提高自己作品质量，就能得到发表。
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Posted: 2013-07-11 19:38:50 Post subject:

远狼 wrote:

有交流才有收获

问好远狼！！
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Posted: 2013-07-11 19:39:50 Post subject: 问好一无！！

一无 wrote:

“辗转回帖几个诗歌论坛
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Posted: 2013-07-12 00:24:50 Post subject:

是这样, 问好老师写诗歌有两个阶段: 练笔: 写得多写诗: 写得少 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2013-07-12 14:39:57 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

是这样, 问好老师

写诗歌有两个阶段:
练笔: 写得多
写诗: 写得少

但有些人往往把练笔误以为才情喷涌了，所以根本不看别人的作品，自以为大诗人了！我为其悲哀！！
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