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都市物语（三首）

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-28 10:29:18 Post subject: 都市物语（三首）

都市物语（三首）山城子脚手架或吊臂脚手架上的黄胶鞋与吊臂上的安全帽儿隔着白云有呼有应升腾起来的水气与略带尾气的风乐哈哈收听。都是皖豫一带的口音以及那些麦场里骂俏的情景十年前，或二十年前崛起的一座座摩天大厦在阳光下肃穆，缅怀归不了根的零星性命街道或社区早早晚晚的才出现他们统一着装的身影扫把与推车在街道或社区晃动偶尔掏出手机大声大气地招呼远方大多是跟留守的孩子急切地叮咛街面常如心情一样果皮枯叶的零零落落总是扫干净了大街小巷也没扫清爽老是鼓着硌着的心情菜市场或水果摊每三米之间各亮着一盏小小节能灯昼夜照着红的白的绿的紫的橙的内容吆喝或不吆喝忙时一家子上阵来不及洗的孩子脏脸蛋儿调皮在货架中风吹不着雨打不着可一年也阳光不着只能从新进的果蔬里嗅嗅故土的风情诺大的都市没有自己的家敷衍三餐的电锅勺铲旁边是忙着的磅秤 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

chenrunmin
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Posted: 2013-03-28 19:25:02 Post subject:

我更欣赏脚手架或吊臂，问好。祝福蛇年，万事如意。 _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-28 21:46:23 Post subject:

谢谢陈润民——是的，第一首好些。 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

白水
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Posted: 2013-03-29 13:04:59 Post subject:

很有生活气息

hepingdao
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Posted: 2013-03-29 13:34:32 Post subject:

来自现实的好诗在阳光下肃穆，缅怀归不了根的零星性命 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2013-03-29 14:23:00 Post subject:

写生活。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

雪蛟
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Posted: 2013-03-30 20:54:16 Post subject:

直击现实，诗意无处不在~

冷巉
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Posted: 2013-03-30 22:37:19 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

来自现实的好诗

在阳光下肃穆，缅怀归不了根的零星性命

这让我想起了远在大洋彼岸的黄翔老师。
问好
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山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-30 23:08:58 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

很有生活气息

谢谢白水！！
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诗是人生的雅伴儿。

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-30 23:09:30 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

来自现实的好诗

在阳光下肃穆，缅怀归不了根的零星性命

谢谢岛主！！
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诗是人生的雅伴儿。

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-30 23:09:59 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

写生活。

问好冲浪！！
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诗是人生的雅伴儿。

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-30 23:10:32 Post subject:

雪蛟 wrote:

直击现实，诗意无处不在~

问好新朋友！！
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诗是人生的雅伴儿。

绿玉
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Posted: 2013-03-30 23:11:08 Post subject:

拜读，学习，问好李老师！

山城子
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Posted: 2013-03-30 23:12:10 Post subject:

冷巉 wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

来自现实的好诗

在阳光下肃穆，缅怀归不了根的零星性命

这让我想起了远在大洋彼岸的黄翔老师。
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问好冷巉！——致以春天的问候！
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诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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