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三、四月,我们楼下(新韵律组诗)
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PostPosted: 2008-04-01 07:14:04    Post subject: 三、四月,我们楼下(新韵律组诗) Reply with quote

三、四月,我们楼下(新韵律组诗)
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如果这个时节我不盘桓楼下,
岂不辜负了当初园林的规划?
享受之后若是不把它写出来,
谁知道我们自由幸福的闲暇?
——题记。

◆ 桃花粉了

不长桃子的这种别致
五瓣儿圆圆的 仰角一百八
暗红的蕊 仿梅
却是粉粉的 不陪雪花
什么时候决定不再生子
青春一世 笑遍天涯
城市里有一族单身女
是他们灵魂粉红到这里外化


◆ 紫荆艳了

总疑那是一树一树的榆钱
朝霞或晚照给染紫了
紫得那样透彻 丰满串串
怯懦得词语没法意象它
或疑天使翩翩然驻足
欲与我们这里的闲逸说话
我说不如驾起春风巡视
看离退休们正棋牌阳光下


◆ 桃红醉了

是少女们的误饮,而醉了吗
脖颈上浅绿的脉管都红了
她们笑出声来说:是了是了
没见春风火炬到了长城脚下
像不像披红的志愿者
我们演练2008北京的盛夏
二十多个小瓣儿重叠成荣幸
银蕊是豪情万丈的焕发


◆ 迎春扬金

沿坎伸上来无数手臂
重瓣的金辉与桃红比试高下
高下我分不出
相得益彰这个词儿我看见了
两个铃声解放的小女孩儿
镶进这画
拾起新落的碎金与玛瑙
小心地往书页里夹……


◆ 樱花竞发

抢先欣慰起来的大朵大朵
正冠上与小鸟说话
收敛着春风得意的劲头
就像青歌大赛荣获了三甲
满枝满枝的绯情
无数蓓蕾摇曳香云竞发
竞发的还有年轻人的小车
小区里笛笛招呼爹妈……


2008-4-1于文化村
(561104 贵州省平坝县红湖学校 李德贵)
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PostPosted: 2008-04-01 08:10:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

紫荆艳了,一直不知道这花叫什么,今天知道了,我们这里也有,
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PostPosted: 2008-04-01 08:17:35    Post subject: Reply with quote


是这个吧?


我照的桃花
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PostPosted: 2008-04-01 18:29:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗一如既往地好。

明月的桃花也好看。
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PostPosted: 2008-04-02 06:08:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好明月!
明月第一张就是紫荆!
第三张不是桃花,是桃红!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-02 06:09:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
诗一如既往地好。

明月的桃花也好看。


问好nobody!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-02 17:13:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

桃红啊~还是第一次听说!桃红柳绿 这也应该是说桃花

不过别人都叫这观赏桃,是不结果的,这样看来,桃红虽然比桃花绚丽,却命运不及能成正果的桃花了~
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PostPosted: 2008-04-02 18:20:26    Post subject: 感谢老乡带来的喜悦,流连中,春天好! Reply with quote

感谢老乡带来的喜悦,流连中,春天好!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-02 18:50:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

真漂亮 诗画一体 严重欣赏品读 问好
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PostPosted: 2008-04-02 22:21:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
桃红啊~还是第一次听说!桃红柳绿 这也应该是说桃花
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我写的第一首,也是不结桃子的,(但不是桃红。)
——结桃子的花瓣儿稍长微尖,张开度120却达不到180。
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PostPosted: 2008-04-02 22:23:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

蓝花伞 wrote:
感谢老乡带来的喜悦,流连中,春天好!


难得相遇在北美——若不是虚拟就好了!
嘿嘿!老乡春天快乐!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-02 22:24:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

莞君 wrote:
真漂亮 诗画一体 严重欣赏品读 问好



问好莞君——致以春天的问候!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-16 16:03:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

几首都押韵
读来入口醇香
美诗美心情
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PostPosted: 2008-04-16 16:11:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

美诗美画,读过心情也美.
几首都押韵,读来琅琅上口.
我的诗基本也跟你一样,首首押
从初一发第一首诗就一直如此
(不过当中有不少年玩专业,
业余当英语书写手,开书店,办培训学校了
望多指点李老师,我们是同行!)
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PostPosted: 2008-04-17 00:39:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

钓月 wrote:
美诗美画,读过心情也美.
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