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[明月乱弹]山城子之<<牛背 >>
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PostPosted: 2008-03-24 07:14:23    Post subject: [明月乱弹]山城子之<<牛背 >> Reply with quote

[明月乱弹]山城子之<<牛背 >>

文/ 半溪明月

牛背
文/ 山城子

前方,厚厚的色块翠黄
两只八哥抢我眼睛
悠闲一处棕黑
渐渐浮出牛背

一畦荒地茁壮青草
牛儿停止啃食打量
人怎么这样孤单?目光说
看我们多么和谐自然

两个八哥不看我
牛背绝对平安
一只,用爪扫了一下喙
另一只,用喙梳理羽毛

[明月乱弹]山城子诗人在田野漫步,眼光触及到一幅和谐的自然景色:牛在慢条斯理吃草,两只八哥在牛背上用喙轻松地梳理羽毛。这情景打动了诗人,也许诗人内心正郁闷出来散步,生活中有些什么不和谐的因素?老牛对两只小鸟的包容态度触动了诗人的心绪,诗歌给我们呈现了一种寂寥和深刻的孤独感。全诗用词质朴,构思精巧。巧就巧在诗人没照惯性思维借景直接抒发内心的感触,而是另劈蹊径,巧妙借用一面镜子(牛的观察)“牛儿停止啃食打量 /人怎么这样孤单?目光说 /看我们多么和谐自然 ”,反观出诗人此刻的孤独潦倒形象。最后一段间接表达了诗人渴望生活中和谐相处,包容弱小的真挚情感。
读这样的诗歌总能令人感动,无浮华之丽语,无豪情之壮言,却于质朴细微处见真情,不动声色地打动着读者的心。这也是我细读山城子老师诗歌最深感触,也让我重新思考写诗的目的和意义。
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欣赏和谐自然优美图画.
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问好杨光!问好阳光!
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