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花和鸟(外一首)
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PostPosted: 2007-07-02 07:46:09    Post subject: 花和鸟(外一首) Reply with quote
花和鸟
文/半溪明月

许多时候，日子过得沉缓
一朵小花也能闪亮眸子
一声鸟鸣也能颤栗天空

你吟唱的小诗，宛若
窗台上摇曳的矢车菊
清晨花园中啁啾的黄雀

一些小感动
一些小喜悦
我乐于收藏的珍宝

孤独的夜晚
嗅着一瓣瓣馨香
沉醉于鸟对花的赞歌

我亲爱的朋友
这些，花和鸟明白
而你永远不知


走，姐请你吃饭

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窗帘低垂，红漆木门紧闭
空调开始紧张地咝咝工作
逛论坛，加链结
他是个好弟弟，只是空气有点干燥

借喝水掩饰喉结的滚动
偶尔触碰的指尖，越来越靠近的肩膀
屏幕上模糊的诗行，逐渐暧昧的椅子
时间过得太慢，我随时准备出逃

肠胃不合时宜地咕咕乱鸣
我突然大笑：走，姐请你吃饭

2007-7-2
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PostPosted: 2007-07-02 08:04:22    Post subject: Reply with quote
后一个很幽默
打破了沉闷
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PostPosted: 2007-07-02 08:29:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
后一个很幽默
打破了沉闷


呵呵,问好岛主~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-02 15:05:42    Post subject: Reply with quote
喜欢死你的诗歌了，写的太好了！
桔子问好~~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-02 17:07:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
我亲爱的朋友
这些，花和鸟明白
而你永远不知

第一首灵气，第二首生动~~
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PostPosted: 2007-07-02 21:32:52    Post subject: Reply with quote
桔子 wrote:
喜欢死你的诗歌了，写的太好了！
桔子问好~~ Very Happy


呵呵,问好桔子~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-02 21:47:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
kino wrote:
我亲爱的朋友
这些，花和鸟明白
而你永远不知

第一首灵气，第二首生动~~


写KINO赏阅,问好!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-03 00:48:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
第二首有意思，幽默撒。呵呵～～
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PostPosted: 2007-07-03 07:25:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
skyufo wrote:
第二首有意思，幽默撒。呵呵～～


呵呵，问好三~ Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-07-03 13:45:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
很好的诗，诙谐，耐读！！
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PostPosted: 2007-07-03 14:38:53    Post subject: Reply with quote
美丽心情------
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PostPosted: 2007-07-03 15:34:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
明月已半溪，水月一色，自如很多。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-04 07:05:15    Post subject: Reply with quote
杨海军 wrote:
很好的诗，诙谐，耐读！！
问好海军~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-04 07:19:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
韩少君 wrote:
美丽心情------
问好少君! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-04 07:28:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
杯中冲浪 wrote:
明月已半溪，水月一色，自如很多。

感谢浪兄鼓励,我会继续努力滴~问好! Very Happy
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