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杨海军
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Posted: 2007-07-12 16:39:25 Post subject: 杯子

杯子三十多年我打造了杯子的房间它的用途是在痛苦时安下我的眼泪在失落时安下我的孤独当然还有一些风雨一些玻璃的碎片一些逐渐暗淡的眼睛一些杀戳之心几次被风摧掉的爱情花瓣它们飘落在夕阳更短风雨更长的路上更多的时候杯子被时间压成一条夹缝竖在生活的角落里无法看见宽大的门扉在黑夜我扣动月光的铜环杯子里的灯亮了成为一块透明的美玉 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-07-12 16:56:34 Post subject:

灵动，并且由同感。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-07-13 07:45:39 Post subject:

不是沒個人都會看到杯子里的燈亮了,但你看到了~~ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

金金
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Posted: 2007-07-14 01:04:46 Post subject:

这首诗歌要特别推荐大家读一下”） _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-07-15 05:22:20 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

灵动，并且由同感。

谢冲浪兄赏读！！！祝好！！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-07-15 05:23:21 Post subject:

阿依琼裙 wrote:

不是沒個人都會看到杯子里的燈亮了,但你看到了~~

谢小米妹妹！！祝你快乐！！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-07-15 05:24:07 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

这首诗歌要特别推荐大家读一下”）

谢金金诗人！！！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-07-15 05:30:30 Post subject:

好！顶！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

桔子
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Posted: 2007-07-15 13:51:32 Post subject:

好个杯子,装下了这么多情感,学习.问好

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-07-17 04:24:18 Post subject:

谢桔子和少君诗人!!祝二位诗人好!!! _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

上城
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Posted: 2007-07-17 17:00:54 Post subject:

欣赏.好久没有读海军兄的诗作了. _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

黑雨滴
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Posted: 2007-07-17 20:45:22 Post subject:

你和我们单位的领导同名同姓一直有种很奇怪的感觉 _________________ 个人主页：http://blog.sina.com.cn/afirewang

溪语
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Posted: 2007-07-17 23:58:02 Post subject:

在黑夜我扣动月光的铜环杯子里的灯亮了 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

杨光
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Posted: 2007-07-18 00:41:00 Post subject:

很有韵味的结尾. _________________ 杨光的语言空间 http://blog.sina.com.cn/languagespace

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-07-20 15:14:07 Post subject:

感谢诗人们赏读!!问候杨光、溪语、黑雨滴、伤城四位诗人！！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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