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刷漆工
桔子
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 14:59:20    Post subject: 刷漆工 Reply with quote

刷漆工

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一个黑点在船壳上拖来拖去
拖出一条条细长的灰线
鱼在不远处游动,对此熟视无睹
他继续在船壳上拖来拖去
乌云将要占满倾斜的天空

沉闷的午后
我们身体中的鱼默然不语
我们遵从世界无形的衣钵
被刺目的斑纹统治
我们做着一场既定的游戏
面对暗礁也面对食人的大鳄

2
渐渐地,他小了下去
渐渐地向船舷靠近
天空剩下一条狭窄的缝
一只眯起的眼静静地注视着一切

背面

我们看不见的事物把我们当作瞎子
比如我们向前走,后面丢下的身影
身影后面成群的房子,车子
还有里面的男人女人。都一样
我们瞎眼时做的事是荒诞的
比如读普希金的诗,看梵高的油画
乘火车旅行,由西向东
还有打秋千码骨牌做游戏。都一样
我们荒诞的时候忘记了烦恼
瞎子的烦恼是看不见
而我们的快乐是看见了荒诞的事物
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hepingdao
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 15:10:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

这两个都喜欢


瞎子的烦恼是看不见
而我们的快乐是看见了荒诞的事物
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桔子
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 15:13:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢喜欢,早晨好 Smile
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杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 16:40:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

写的不错,语言和感觉都不错!!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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野航
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 18:15:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

语感很好!
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-05-22 20:21:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

理性, 新颖. 不错的俩首
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