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我想看护你的花园

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-05-04 01:36:45 Post subject: 我想看护你的花园

我想看护你的花园我不住你的房间我在你的门旁露宿听到你早起的声音我就得匆匆上路现在，我要趁着黑夜在你的心里种下红的、绿的、黄的各色火苗远望像篝火,近看叫花园我要躺在园中小憩等你醒来桃之夭夭 [size=9]（我无宗教。我的“脱俗”就是向爱、向美、向善。我的“救赎”就是无限地忠诚自己的肉体和灵魂。我无形而上。我热爱世俗，形而下地活着）[/size] _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

彤欣
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Posted: 2009-05-04 03:39:01 Post subject:

现在，我要趁着黑夜在你的心里种下红的、绿的、黄的各色火苗远望像篝火,近看叫花园 ---------喜欢这样的诗句！问好！

上城
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Posted: 2009-05-04 03:55:04 Post subject:

这首非常好。十分工整问好 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

白水
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Posted: 2009-05-04 15:50:30 Post subject:

（我无宗教。我的“脱俗”就是向爱、向美、向善。我的“救赎”就是无限地忠诚自己的肉体和灵魂。我无形而上。我热爱世俗，形而下地活着）欣赏

安红红
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Posted: 2009-05-04 21:45:04 Post subject:

现在越来越喜欢纯粹干净的诗歌了~ 问好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

nobody
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Posted: 2009-05-04 22:00:55 Post subject:

想了半天，实在不知说什么好，呵呵 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

吟啸徐行
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Posted: 2009-05-04 23:22:56 Post subject:

简而有味,纯而不俗,青睐中! _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-05-05 03:58:47 Post subject:

_________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-05-05 06:09:08 Post subject:

纯净的诗歌~问好！

慈林
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Posted: 2009-05-05 06:19:15 Post subject:

第一句有些突兀,闺女的房间当然是不可入住的.其他皆好.喜欢简洁.

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-05-05 16:01:59 Post subject:

_________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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