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《瞬间他长大了》
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PostPosted: 2007-06-07 04:04:07    Post subject: 《瞬间他长大了》 Reply with quote

《瞬间他长大了》
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他正走在人生路上,为了日后的生存与希望,不得不离家背乡,远程车上有他欢快的笑声,畅达的理想正慢慢由他在人生中实现与溶有。
他长大了,会自己拖着行李走入社会,请我放心再次由他心中出发,我应该祝贺,祝贺他明天的辉煌与今天的成长。
真的长大了。昨天的一切将留存希望,昨天的快乐将给予明天明媚的阳光。
不需要过多的嘱托,不用多余的话语,开心的气氛早已由他发出,给人一种安慰,一种真心的交流,一种突然的愉悦,一种漫漫人生路上清甜的回忆。
朝霞升起的时候,薄暮层层雾化。一种痛的幸福正由寂静的心房划过,百感交激却无法表达。一种迷乱,一种感性的失落,即兴奋又开心。
止于瞬间,那种恍惚的状态便一闪而过,淤积在胸口的情感随着引流射向亘古的空间;
一个特定的时刻来源于一种久远的记忆,绚丽的朝霞正薄雾而出,给人一种宁静,一种神秘,一种寂寥的情怀。
走上人生路,你正用一种稚嫩的坚强与微笑让我们感到轻松。你用一种娇嫩的双手正谱写人生最美丽的前景。相信你将成为一颗璀璨的明星,我将是你忠实的后盾及拥戴者。你正萌动的个性,将生长出搏击长空的翅膀;你强健的体格,将磨炼你对人生的挑战。你是我的幸福,你是我的未来。
能力体现意志,品质决定方向。祝福你,人生路上:一路平安、一路绿灯、一路成功,一路保重。
突然之间心空空的,上升的高度也在增强,软软的没有任何声响,没有任何期盼,一切就是这么自然,这么无力。
一个小人儿就这么走入了大人的世界,好似是一瞬间,一瞬间……

2007年6月2日星期六9时30分
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PostPosted: 2007-06-29 10:33:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

读起来 自然的潇洒 ;)
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PostPosted: 2007-07-01 04:59:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

比较空泛,最好加具体的实际的内容。
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