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〖金金作品〗晕天之内
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PostPosted: 2010-04-10 21:18:44    Post subject: 〖金金作品〗晕天之内 Reply with quote

《晕天之内》

晕天之内,都有歌唱的狂欢声音
一闪一躲,一撤一退
停止中流淌记忆,张嘴的口型
那声音直接地扑面而来
至少身体的半边被动摇晃快意
这快意若传到体内……
将连续地又被和声覆盖

晕天之内,都有图画的鲜艳
啮咬记忆的东西
回归于画中。失败的成功的画
不断分解感情的
只有忘记能使自觉销声匿迹
期待或者失望,让你
跌倒在震撼的门槛……

2010年4月11日 中午
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PostPosted: 2010-04-11 19:43:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

yes, 找到感觉了 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-04-11 22:53:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

我这两年只感到很累很累,有天若身体恢复了,我想我会写出超越式倾向的最大化。问好水王! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-04-12 01:07:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

跌倒在震撼的门槛……

问好金金!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-12 02:46:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好!盼更多佳作!
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