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城市系列之五:灵魂孤寂的城市
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PostPosted: 2007-07-14 15:19:49    Post subject: 城市系列之五:灵魂孤寂的城市 Reply with quote

城市系列之五:



灵魂孤寂的城市



杜冷丁开始猖獗

意志哭泣着被麻醉

喧闹的白天

烦躁的黑夜

人们无处可逃

绝望不能减速

冲破一切阻力



灵魂孤寂的城市

记忆在灰色的天空

寻觅不到清晰的思路

心灵的船难以靠上城市的岸

唯有星星为你指点迷津

没有了秦砖汉瓦的诗意

只有横着的沥青竖着的水泥



琥珀色的啤酒

醉得股市跌跌撞撞

摇晃房地产的泡沫

酒桌上比试撬动地球的妄想

酒气中炫耀着金屋藏娇

醉酒中的句号

就像黑洞洞的枪口

躲闪不及



本来明澈的瞳仁

望不见天上的北斗星

分不清地上的黑与白

夹竹桃刺痛眼睛

爱情被一次次封杀



英雄笔能否续写英雄的篇章

两颗大白兔奶糖豪华的包装







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PostPosted: 2007-07-15 01:18:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

深刻,警世。语言穿透力强。

问好
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PostPosted: 2007-07-15 05:01:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错的诗。问候东兵兄!!
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