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星期天
时东兵
举人


Joined: 23 Dec 2006
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Location: 中国上海
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PostPosted: 2009-01-31 18:12:17    Post subject: 星期天 Reply with quote

星期天



一杯白开水

从清早醒来开始

洗白了夜幕

也把一天的肠胃

洗得干干净净

一盏白炽灯

从博客的首页开始

清理得整整齐齐

一粒药丸

从口腔开始进入

删除脑子里的碎片



然后细细地欣赏

浸润在水墨中的山水

灵气渐渐沉入丹田

神思飘飘欲仙

游走在玄岳武当

一头雄狮静静走来

诗开始涌动豪气





欢迎光临时东兵的博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1246222181
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赵福治
探花


Joined: 30 May 2006
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PostPosted: 2009-01-31 22:38:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

这首切入别具.问好.
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文立冰
童生


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PostPosted: 2009-02-01 05:50:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

清晰干净,赏
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骨笛
秀才


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PostPosted: 2009-02-01 06:17:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

好兴致
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