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内环中环外环
时东兵
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Joined: 23 Dec 2006
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PostPosted: 2008-12-27 16:40:06    Post subject: 内环中环外环 Reply with quote

内环中环外环



现在说

内环以内是城中心

也就十几年前还闻蛙声

住新村的人去南京路

说是去上海



后来修了外环

觉得原来的城市躯壳太小

挤得人喘不过气来

可没过几年

外环又堵得胸闷



再增加一环

在内环与外环之间

便有了中环

环中环圈中圈

越套越憋气



据说还要

在外环以外建郊环

如此循环

如何走出怪圈?





欢迎光临时东兵的博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1246222181
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-12-28 17:47:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

城市怪圈,越发展,越憋气~问好时老师!
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文立冰
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PostPosted: 2008-12-28 20:06:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗意干净直接,赏提!
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