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感悟诗歌创作之：捕捉诗意（7－9）

时东兵
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Posted: 2008-10-28 19:32:40 Post subject: 感悟诗歌创作之：捕捉诗意（7－9）

感悟诗歌创作之：捕捉诗意 7 有张力，才能撑起一片天而丁香一样的姑娘，不是点缀是不能缺少的主角，雨不落在诗人的心上，就不会有雨巷。当然油纸伞也不是道具诗人手中伸缩自如的意象诗里的姑娘够你暗恋一辈子诗外的雨巷够你回味一辈子和诗恋爱吧你会永远年轻！ 8 彩纸折叠成花或别的什么那是手艺木材做成书柜或其它家具那是技艺是艺术的雏形决非是全部诗需要技巧但不能用力过猛重重的痕迹会伤害诗的肌肤像用了过多化妆品的女人让人觉得不真实甚至厌恶丑女多作怪清水芙蓉贵在自然看不出技巧是最高的技巧 9 赏菊时就会想起陶渊明还有寿比的南山可眼前的菊花已不是从前的了多多少少染上知名与不知名的文人故作风雅的色彩艾略特会删去落在诗上的灰尘陈芝麻烂谷子败坏了诗的胃口割草机的声音有点生硬可我还是喜欢散发出的那种清新的气息欢迎光临时东兵的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1246222181

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-10-28 22:12:02 Post subject:

轻快. 雨不落在诗人的心上，就不会有雨巷

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