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掌上乾坤系列之一:王者拇指

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Posted: 2008-07-03 20:21:56 Post subject: 掌上乾坤系列之一:王者拇指

掌上乾坤系列之一: 王者拇指总是把夸奖毫不吝啬地给予别人自己却放在最低的位置成员们自动地弯下身躯拥戴你站成顶好的姿态心甘情愿与你合作牢牢抓住稍纵即逝的机会总是独处一隅你总归还是王者可时常低下高贵的头颅攥紧钢铁般的意志摧毁一切恶势力欢迎光临时东兵的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1246222181

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Posted: 2008-07-03 21:57:18 Post subject:

攥紧钢铁般的意志摧毁一切恶势力有点生硬了~问好时老师!

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Posted: 2008-07-04 17:34:26 Post subject:

前面都不错.结尾似乎稍显老套. 最后能出新意即可成绝唱. 问好先生 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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