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事业大得没办法
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PostPosted: 2010-04-23 01:47:37    Post subject: 事业大得没办法 Reply with quote

“我有么办法?这是事业呀!哪叫我的事业做得这么大,我有什么办法?叫你做事业你又不做!你不做我做又拦我!” 乍一听到这话,你是不是也跟我一样蒙啦?这是做的什么事业啊,大得自己都没有办法?说实话,当我逛进那家服装店,听到跟店老板夫妇交谈的那个女人在指责旁边的男人(应该是她丈夫)时,我也很好奇:这女人是干嘛的?竟然说出这样的豪言!难道是什么女企业家?只是,本地的私营企业主我是基本了解的,检索一下记忆库,似乎没听说过有哪个女人干实业的。那她到底是干什么的?事业竟然做得大到自己都没办法!我不禁好奇起来。

“单位派我到黄冈去是开会……”那女人接着说,哦,原来是什么机关单位的,既然是单位的,事业做得大就是当官啦,只是镇上的女人,除了镇政府的段委外我似乎还没听说有另外的女同胞官做得大,难不成不是本镇人士?

我围着衣服架子一件件地看着衣服,顺带也拣着耳朵,猜度着他人的闲事。

不知不觉就转到了柜台边的货架旁。柜台边有一个四五岁的小女孩在写字,应该是发生口角的年轻夫妇的孩子。那被埋怨不做事业的丈夫走了,一直劝解他们的老板娘对面站着一个女人。瞟一眼,感觉很年轻,应该是八十年代生人,打扮得也入时,面善,似乎在哪里见过。到底是哪里呢?我也想不起来了。只听她把丈夫埋怨走了后,话题就转到了她的工作上:“我们幼儿园现在很不错啊……”

哦,原来是一名幼儿教师,哪个幼儿园的?县直?即便是县直幼儿园的老师,能谈得上事业做得很大吗?我不禁哑然暗笑。

“她……似乎在哪里看过……叫么名字?”忽然,听得她压低声音跟老板娘说起了我。语气似乎有些尴尬——为她自己刚才的夸口吗?

“我不晓得叫她叫什么?只晓得她是小学的老师。”老板娘如实回答。

对我的猜度虽然入了耳,我却一直装着没听到,只跟老板说着自己看中的那件衣服。

“你是陶XX老师吧?”那刚才说事业大得自己没办法的幼儿教师问我。我摇摇头,看来,她多少还是知道我的。

“似乎是叫么事X吧?”她说。我笑笑,没做声,算是肯定。

“你的课讲得挺好的,我听过两回。”她说。听过我的课?那她应该是本镇的了!我还当是干什么的呢?镇幼儿园成立才三四年时间,所收幼儿两百来人,规模说不上大。至于名气,即便是园长,事业也大不到哪里去。至于这个女教师,至多也就当个幼儿园的管教学的主任吧?可是知情人谁不清楚幼儿园的教职工多是外聘,只要是正规在编的教师在里面都当主任!我不觉好笑!即便当初,老公同意我去幼儿园当园长,我也不会膨胀到认为自己的事业大得不得了!现在的女孩子,还真的不一样!

离开小店的时候,我忍不住地笑出了声。只是敲完这段文字之后,我却忍不住把女孩与自己进行了对比,在家庭与事业的矛盾中截然不同的处理,或许就是八O后与七O后的区别吧?
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PostPosted: 2010-04-24 06:54:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

是小说吗?问好荷梦老师。拜读了。
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2010-04-24 21:04:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,不是小说,但生活中原本就有曲折的情节,不过记下这些文字的时候,我还不知道罢了!所以这篇里没有情节,只有如实的场景与随感记录。
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PostPosted: 2010-04-25 16:24:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

真实的生活片段,更有感染力量。
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PostPosted: 2010-04-25 21:21:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

一身灰 wrote:
真实的生活片段,更有感染力量。

问好!生活中的画面,生活中的人,因为真实,才更可信!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-26 10:13:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

写的有情趣。问好!
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2010-04-26 21:06:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
写的有情趣。问好!
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当时就觉得好笑,好玩,后来又有了一些思考。。。
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PostPosted: 2010-04-29 18:36:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

这个说法很新鲜,有见出了人的精神面貌,很值得挖掘的素材.
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PostPosted: 2010-05-18 20:27:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

阅读。荷梦爱从日常生活中抓素材。
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PostPosted: 2010-06-01 23:30:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

好文, 生动,有看头。
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