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发表于: 2008-02-17 05:18:10 发表主题: 艾青《我愛這土地》英譯

《我愛這土地》假如我是一隻鳥，我也應該用嘶啞的喉嚨歌唱：這被暴風雨所打擊著的土地，這永遠洶湧著我們的悲憤的河流，這無止息地吹刮著的激怒的風，和那來自林間的無比溫柔的黎明…… —然後我死了，連羽毛也腐爛在土地裡面。為什麼我的眼裡常含淚水？因為我對這土地愛得深沉…… I Love This Land by Ai Qing If I were a bird, I should sing, with a husky throat, this land that is being ravaged by storms, this river in which our indignation constantly surges, this raging gale that is blowing incessantly, and that infinitely gentle dawn emerging from the woods... — then I should die, and my feathers should also rot in the earth. Why are my eyes always filled with tears? Because I deeply love this land... _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

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发表于: 2008-02-18 17:00:12 发表主题:

I have read them and learned from them.thanks. by the way, can "would" be used instead of the last two"should"? _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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发表于: 2008-02-19 09:38:48 发表主题:

用would也可以，我用should是想和第一句保持一致的語氣。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

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发表于: 2008-02-25 06:22:38 发表主题:

Why are my eyes always filled with tears? Because I'm deeply in love with this land... 补充几个音节，是不是在形式更好点?