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弦弓上

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Posted: 2007-05-02 20:52:22 Post subject: 弦弓上

弦弓上一切都在变，灵魂撞击肉体，忐忑冲击安宁一分钟或一刻钟你无法开口，闪电划破天幕梦的上面梦的下面，大水冲破了龙王庙，汪洋一片垂下黑幕，石头燃烧；干渴的嘴唇，喷出火最先醒来的人，朦胧中无法睁开眼睛，呼救来得及吗大地一片汪洋，一片火海，然后一片鲜花灵魂喃喃自语，自私被幸福包容，忐忑被安宁宠爱世界剥落中还原，是与非、非与是，握手相安压抑下的灵魂扭曲中伸直，不声张的人大声呼喊你我理解的光明，正与黑暗互相渗透，拥抱狂欢狗，吠高了树，鸟，唱开了鲜花，梦流动，狗和猫兄弟相称但是，你的期望继续沦陷，你的泪继续流，幸福对爱人说：不 _________________ 我爱是因为有所不爱

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Posted: 2007-05-02 21:20:43 Post subject: Re: 弦弓上

风动松柏 wrote:

弦弓上

一切都在变，灵魂撞击肉体，忐忑冲击安宁
一分钟或一刻钟你无法开口，闪电划破天幕
梦的上面梦的下面，大水冲破了龙王庙，汪洋一片

垂下黑幕，石头燃烧；干渴的嘴唇，喷出火
最先醒来的人，朦胧中无法睁开眼睛，呼救来得及吗
大地一片汪洋，一片火海，然后一片鲜花

灵魂喃喃自语，自私被幸福包容，忐忑被安宁宠爱
世界剥落中还原，是与非、非与是，握手相安
压抑下的灵魂扭曲中伸直，不声张的人大声呼喊

你我理解的光明，正与黑暗互相渗透，拥抱狂欢
狗，吠高了树，鸟，唱开了鲜花，梦流动，狗和猫兄弟相称
但是，你的期望继续沦陷，你的泪继续流，幸福对爱人说：不

问好　　老朋友　：）

Cool

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Posted: 2007-05-02 21:34:11 Post subject:

问候风动诗人！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-05-03 20:23:38 Post subject:

哲理似乎，反正看着舒服着最好是猛看一眼再猛看一眼，这样很好感觉：）问好：） _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2007-05-04 11:11:59 Post subject:

读. _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2007-05-04 20:04:00 Post subject:

这太长的句子，读的总不是很轻松。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-05-06 01:01:29 Post subject: Re: 弦弓上

kokho wrote:

风动松柏 wrote:

问好　　老朋友　：）

Cool

也问好老朋友,谢谢你一直以来的支持.
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Posted: 2007-05-06 01:02:40 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

问候风动诗人！！

问好海军.
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Posted: 2007-05-06 01:04:18 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

哲理似乎，反正看着舒服着

最好是猛看一眼再猛看一眼，这样很好感觉

：）问好：）

问好,赞成感性阅读.
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Posted: 2007-05-06 01:05:34 Post subject:

伤城 wrote:

读.

谢谢阅读.
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Posted: 2007-05-06 01:07:08 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

这太长的句子，读的总不是很轻松。

问好,谢谢.
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