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PostPosted: 2007-01-10 22:31:03    Post subject: 潜默 Reply with quote

潜默

从午夜的书房出走
慢步走向青草丛生的地方
坚韧的夜色中无声地唱着天籁
让我醉在夜的迷离
星空下,一朵花正展开它深藏的大梦
一颗种子也同时爆裂,让月光映照生命的宣言
这时竹林里一棵竹笋破土而出,旁边的野菜震动了一阵
它发现蜗牛并没有睡觉,花朵正显露出一片红晕
蚯蚓凭感觉感受土中的温凉,嚼着绿叶的虫子不知有没有味觉
这时一株小草正幻想着在这一年中它应该得到多少的水分
一只青蛙国国地叫着,一种舒畅让灵魂得到放松
我正凝聚成一滴透明的露珠,颤抖中滑落
这时树和树开始了交谈,叶子和叶子小声说话
邻里的根互相问候和拥抱,人类在喃喃自语中暴露了秘密
一只狗的惊叫声惊醒了世界,我感觉有人在跑
我从土中站起来,缓缓地穿过雾气走向河的对岸
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PostPosted: 2007-01-10 23:06:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

我从土中站起来,缓缓地穿过雾气走向河的对岸

这许多镜头,连起来也不容易
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PostPosted: 2007-01-11 06:30:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢结尾的句子。
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PostPosted: 2007-01-11 07:05:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢.
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PostPosted: 2007-01-26 22:06:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

这是生命的语言.
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PostPosted: 2007-01-27 17:12:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

万千思绪, 醉在夜的迷离. 很有想象力.
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PostPosted: 2007-01-28 07:02:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
万千思绪, 醉在夜的迷离. 很有想象力.
谢谢.
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