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帖子发表于: 2007-08-23 17:31:41    发表主题: PM 引用并回复

This may not be regarded as a poem for it is just out of an impulse when I received a personal message from Nia, a Turkish poet friend who I miss very much. So I penned it down without much refinement.

PM

If it were not for that wake-up call
She would’ve been still in hibernation
For how long
She really does not know
If it were not for that wake-up call
She would've been still wandering around
For how far
She really does not know

But that personal message
Such a sweet, tender reminder
Popping up “how have you been?”
Lights up a gloomy day
Electrifies her still heart
A lone bird trailed behind
Now goes “flap, flap, flap”
Over tree tops, up again
Into the bosom of the sky


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帖子发表于: 2007-09-06 14:04:09    发表主题: 引用并回复



A very touching recital poem - well done Smile

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帖子发表于: 2007-09-06 17:43:52    发表主题: 引用并回复

Your comment 'recital' sounds negative to me, and 'well done' , equivalent to 拜读。 Rolling Eyes
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帖子发表于: 2007-09-20 12:36:15    发表主题: 引用并回复

you think too much Smile

paranoia ??
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