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 fābiǎoyú: 2012-11-16 22:59:50 fābiǎozhùtí: A found poem |
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(have been engaged in writing a found poem, here's the one whose source is from a comment on a poem) 
A nice first offering
That’s funny:
I like the sound of the poem-
wind waltzed wings
tempt caged tears that grieve,
although I’m having trouble
coaxing the exact sense.
The mood
I can’t be more precise
than that about it.
There are lots of ee
and oh sounds,
that are almost too much
but aren’t quite.
It’s a sonnet, is it?
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| fābiǎoyú: 2013-02-28 12:02:28 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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cutely re-organized
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| fābiǎoyú: 2013-03-02 08:40:45 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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| wind waltzed wings ... |
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