Peak Time

[Lake]

the entrance
of the

parking lot
where

everything halts
except

in the glare of
headlights

two geese waddle
around
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

[博弈]

很有趣味！

I think it may be better if it is
"at the entrance"

(it would be: everything halts at the entrance....)

also, "peak hour" is more commonly used.
peak time is fine too.



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[Lake]

Thanks for the feedback from the antic, antique typewriter.

I see what you mean.

Thanks much,博弈!

Lake
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins