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wintersong(81-90)
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tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-02-06 12:13:53    fābiǎozhùtí: wintersong(81-90) yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

wintersong

1
gray skies
croaking ravens
darken the backyard

2
winter sun
brighter than summer
spring in icicle drops

3
piercing wind
on my window sills
dried boxelder bugs

4
in the stillness
winding up the hill
unknown footprints

5
after the girl left
a lost feeling
creeps in

6
cold night, in the
humming of the furnace
garage doors screech

7
in the darkness
computer screen blinks
with twinkling stars

8
winter morning
the car’s headlight -
the first light of daybreak

9
missing the stop sign
missing the stop
police car’s behind

10
record low-
this cold
even in my bosom

.
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詩盜喜裸評běiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-02-06 14:20:55    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

READ!
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Lakeběiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-02-07 06:52:03    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

詩盜喜裸評 xièdào:
READ!


So? Cool

Seriously, thanks for your READ! But where is you ax?

Happy New Year and stay warm!

Lake
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hepingdao
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hepingdaoběiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-02-07 07:54:42    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

like stars
words
twinkle in the winter sky
Very Happy
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tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-02-07 14:45:51    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

Lake xièdào:
詩盜喜裸評 xièdào:
READ!


So? Cool

Seriously, thanks for your READ! But where is you ax?
...


Read again
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白水
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白水běiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-02-07 19:02:58    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù



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tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-02-08 07:24:33    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

hepingdao xièdào:
like stars
words
twinkle in the winter sky
Very Happy


ah, I like it.

these words -
a comment or a verse?
both, I suppose.


Very Happy

Happy Chinese New Year!
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tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-02-08 07:26:42    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

詩盜喜裸評 xièdào:

Read again


Thanks again! Razz
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tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-02-08 07:29:15    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

白水 Moonlight xièdào:




白水辛苦了,挨家挨户去拜年。

The same to you!
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tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-02-10 00:47:33    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

lovely yet sentimental
like the subtle touch.
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William Zhou周道模běiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-02-21 21:52:34    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

i've read these english poems,and i like them becouse they're easy to

understand ,and you can think of more about them,and they are beautiful!
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kino
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kinoběiměifēngwénjí
tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-02-23 23:44:35    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

有俳句的感觉,简洁而有意境。很喜欢。
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tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-02-25 13:27:39    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

博弈 xièdào:
lovely yet sentimental
like the subtle touch.


Thanks 博弈, hope it's not too sentimental.
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tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2008-02-25 13:28:55    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

谢谢Kino 的喜欢。

William, thanks for your read and comment!
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