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 发表于: 2015-12-12 22:15:22 发表主题: Holiday Nuts |
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Holiday Nuts
It’s (the) time of the year
cold outside but the party is warm
there are acorns, almonds
pistachios and
pecans in display
What a parade
hard maybe the shell
cold maybe the cover
yet deep within
we are nuts coming out:
Season’s greetings to all!
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Very homey. 为什么 the 要加括号？是不是代表 " nuts" ?
看到nuts就想笑。Yes, we go nuts, we are all nuts.
Season's greetings to one and all!
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Very homey. 为什么 the 要加括号？是不是代表 " nuts" ?
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Happy 2016 to you, Lake.
good question, here
(the) : gives a visual effect the nut is about to crack, () is more like the shell in a way
also, "it's time" has a different meaning than "it's the time,"
the word 'the' makes all the difference, ha!
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